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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A poem for the White cloud (السحاب الابيض)


Asolvip
2013-07-05, 17:53
I want to run after that white cloud
I just want to catch it*
I keep screaming aloud*
I just want to touch it
That white cloud can take me up
It was my inspiration*
So I'll run after it and I won't stop
It is an amazing creation*
White as snow*
Bright and shinny I wonder how many smiles it draws? (normal cloud)
And now [السحابة البيضاء]
May be thousand smile a day*
She *guides us in our way*
She always advises us and say:
Keep on going ! Do your best , in this English forum you should stay
To prove yourselves you must work hard and pray ...
To Allah ...*
I wish that Allah keep u for us because ...
You're the leader .. You're * the boss*
With *you we have no loss*
Your english forum is shining like the gloss
With our writing ... It will be like a vast ocean*
We will be popular because this forum is like a promotion
Finally we thank you *"white cloud"
We love you and we are proud
You raised us from the ground
And you gave us a chance to shout aloud
"we are the best writers ever "
We will stay here forever

Katy Pretty girl
2013-07-05, 18:08
nice words
and great job
white cloud is a realy active member here
respect!!

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 18:12
Even I don't know her but she is amazing person :) shes always by our sides

Katy Pretty girl
2013-07-05, 18:14
that's right

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 18:23
Ya! It's totally right :) I truly thank her from the deep of my heart because she truly supported me

ريشة خير
2013-07-05, 18:58
Amazing Sweetie!

and if u ask me i will say:
That white cloud is a friend that is not easy to find
And an active moderator that will discover sooner or later

May Allah bless you and her

السَّحابة البيضاءْ
2013-07-05, 19:06
Thank you very much
It was really a beautiful surprise for me
Your words have deeply touched my heart
:):):)

My Allah bless you

I wish all the success in your life little Abir

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-07-05, 19:20
Well done it's nice from you to dedicate this work for sister White cloud she's the reason why this forum is alive again thanks Allah she came at the right time and see the result and i'm sure this forum will be something great and bright due to efforts of Moderators Like White Cloud and due to active members like you Asolvip thank you for this nice topic

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 19:33
Yes ... From the begging I knew that she is a great active moderator :)

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 19:38
Thank you very much
It was really a beautiful surprise for me
Your words have deeply touched my heart
:):):)

My Allah bless you

I wish all the success in your life little Abir



You deserve all the best my sister ... I'll write for you more & more ... You were always there for us and ESP me I won't forget your support ... I'll do my best to make this forum active as much as I can :)

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 19:55
Well done it's nice from you to dedicate this work for sister White cloud she's the reason why this forum is alive again thanks Allah she came at the right time and see the result and i'm sure this forum will be something great and bright due to efforts of Moderators Like White Cloud and due to active members like you Asolvip thank you for this nice topic
Thank you my brother ... You are also an active member and your work is fantastic ... So let's keep on our carreer ... Being an English writer in ALG is bit impossible but we will make our dreams come true

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-07-05, 20:00
this depends on how much you are patient and eager to discover new ideas...in ALG is not impossible I saw so many times young writters on TV exactly the emission called elfahrass and every 2 years or every year there is (salon elkitab) for the youth what you need is to write and don't stop till the chance will be between your hands.

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 20:01
Amazing Sweetie!

and if u ask me i will say:
That white cloud is a friend that is not easy to find
And an active moderator that will discover sooner or later

May Allah bless you and her

Thank you ... Your forum is great too ... I'm good in designing pictures so if there's a competition I'll be glad to participate :)

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 20:07
this depends on how much you are patient and eager to discover new ideas...in ALG is not impossible I saw so many times young writters on TV exactly the emission called elfahrass and every 2 years or every year there is (salon elkitab) for the youth what you need is to write and don't stop till the chance will be between your hands.

Ok I'll write and write but I'm afraid that stealers take my written pieces ... Id love to see all the people reading them but I can't trust the net ... Everyone can say : I own it ! So how I'm gonna protect my works?

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-07-05, 20:11
aaaaaah here we got the problem it's the same problem of mine we can't trust the net and yes I got some of my poems copied in some sites once before I could not get the admin unfortunately

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 20:32
See! If I wrote them and hid them in my copy book .. No one will read them , you Will feel disappointed and u might stop writing .. And if u published them , they might be stolen ... So what we gotta do?!
Well I'm just writing here for fun only :/

نَازِكْ
2013-07-05, 20:47
our presious sister deserves it in fact she desrves more and more
yeah she is our savor she saves the forum from death
and thanx sister abir for sharing keep it up

Asolvip
2013-07-05, 21:12
You're welcome my siSter ! She deserves all the best .. May Allah save her and bless her ...
I wish that this forum keep blooming ;)

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-07-06, 18:52
See! If I wrote them and hid them in my copy book .. No one will read them , you Will feel disappointed and u might stop writing .. And if u published them , they might be stolen ... So what we gotta do?!
Well I'm just writing here for fun only :/


That's the problem look as you said if you try to keep them in your copybook you won't do nothing and you will not know how they're look like coz this kind of works need the critics i mean the constructive critics to develop what is undeveloped in case we're living in a country that educational forums set in libraries whether public libraries or those of universities but the problem is here students read but not interpret this is the problem of the present days! here a point
the backup plan is to write in Djelfa when you write here it can be stolen what to do I don't even me I write but I don't know what's the fate of my topics I can't advice to write or not this is your personal thing sorry

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-07-06, 18:58
White cloud The English forum savior

Asolvip
2013-07-06, 22:57
Definitly she is our saviour
She defends on our right like worrior
I really appreciate her hard work

Karim-Rap-4-Life
2013-07-07, 19:34
Yes We all do ^^

Asolvip
2013-07-07, 20:35
It's good we got the chance to show ourselves here ... Myself I used to dream to be popular ... But now I think my dream got a piece of hope ... It might come true :)

*نسيم الفجر*
2013-07-08, 15:10
exellent!!!! i really like it...

Asolvip
2013-07-08, 16:27
Thanks a lot .. I hope you could check our other poems :)