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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The Afterlife


sofmega
2013-06-28, 18:31
doomed to suffer in a room with no light dust upon you like a dress covering all of your body no air breeze to make your skin twist no sounds to make you ear cheer no sorrows to make your eyes tear only the feeling of your soul crushed in the shores of despair wondering for ever in the desert of confusion asking for the path you made to get in this end . life was only a room my friend you took only a small step and left it by another door now to be damned in an afterlife there's no lies or truths to admit years of your life was barely the margin of history kingdoms were forgotten heroes lost in the shadows of age . time is your enemy you will count the seconds cause each one passes death come closer to you door . we had faith before to overcome the fears of the unknown we used to believe that time is ours to waste but the journey we took by will two choice were offered one choice was made
don't be so much judging and i didn't take another path away from our religion it mostly about Islam and the lost people we find it's just a reminder what is waiting for us

Asolvip
2013-06-28, 19:36
Really nice ... But I didnt understand ... Are u writing poem or just a text
About the words ; they are so touchful ... Amazing !

Asolvip
2013-06-28, 19:40
Really nice ... But I didnt understand ... Are u writing poem or just a text
About the words ; they are so touchful ... Amazing !

sofmega
2013-06-28, 20:29
i tried to copy the style of an old poet i believe i failed maybe

Katy Pretty girl
2013-06-30, 18:04
i found it so interesting and amazing
i loved the words the way u were expressing u'r emotions
it was so wonderfull
keep it bro
keep writting