This For The One i've Lost

[sofmega]

Always trying to forget your love but the more i tried the hard i fall
soon enough there won't be hopes and I'm the fool hanging on their ropes
slowly time pass but hardly your face could be past
Green eyes fair hair how could i dare to loose such angel without care

it's just the begging and please don't be hard in your judges

[Asolvip]

No ! Your poem is so nice ... It's agood beginning
I liked the way you express your feelings ...
Well , every time the person gets hurt, he will express his feelings in a very good way
We all get hurt before ... So we always try to give our best

[ضيفي فتحي]

nice try ... i love it honstly

[Katy Pretty girl]

how i can i be hard
no
actualy i found it so deep
the sad feelings and the broken heart can make u write more and more
and as long as u write u'll feel good
just keep it up bro
and i'll be waitting the rest of it