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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Love.. the best feeling *my new poem*


المستعينة بالله
2013-06-28, 04:13
Brothers & sisters :mh92:

how are you ?

I miss you so much , and you?

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I have a new poem for you, and I hope you like it

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:cool: let's start :cool:

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Love.. the best feeling

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You must start believing


That love is the best feeling


When you cry ,


Because someone is die


Love will make you pushing


When you give up , when you grieve


Love will make you alive


When you fall, because your friend lie


Your love will help you to stay


So thank Allah and pray


Cause love makes you a ray





:mh31: GOODBYE :mh31:

المستعينة بالله
2013-06-28, 15:09
you didn't like it??

no problem , just say, I will accept that, ok

Maria Rap 4 Ever
2013-06-28, 15:21
it was really nice sis i liked it so much
good work ........keep it up

المستعينة بالله
2013-06-28, 15:38
Maria , dear sister am happy because you like it

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thank you

sofmega
2013-06-29, 11:29
there's some mistakes you've made but is a good effort and good poem

srh
2013-06-29, 13:53
thanks sist it's a good one..n you're so right love is best feeling

المستعينة بالله
2013-06-29, 17:41
Thank you...

Jona♥dz
2013-06-29, 18:09
yes u r right ..

thx dear i like it

المستعينة بالله
2013-06-30, 11:21
thank you sis

dreams killer
2013-06-30, 17:22
yeah love is agood feeling

المستعينة بالله
2013-06-30, 23:00
absolutely . yes

thank you