death melody

[نَازِكْ]

Death melody
I used to hear the winds whisper
Telling me your story won’t wither
I used to watch the rains fall
But every time my tears turn into a waterfall
And with every fallen tear
A symphony of loneliness spread in ma ear
Washing away ma fear
Yeah;that melody was s so clear
But gloomy clouds were drawing near
Now all what I hear is a tearful voice as my heart is fading away
In that mire of hatred I’m astray
There; I’m drowning ,my horizon vanishes away
Inside me, a tornado is about to form
That voice is going on
As life gives me a curse
Having no choice of course
It makes me realize, that voice is mine
Looking around ,every thing seems fine
But silent wraps its self around me
My misted eyes are hurting me
I wanna hear that symphony
There’s no doubt it’ll calm me
But I still hear myself crying
Telling me: you are dying
It’s singing a death melody
Every tune expresses a tragedy
I hear it over and over
I just want it to be over
Now it’s saying:
“a heart full of hatred someday will blow up
Happiness you are looking for you’ll never catch it up
Your dream, your story Tragically will wind up
I’m losing my breath
I just wanna a break
I wonder, how far can I keep stepping forward?
The past is a dead memory, why can’t i understand?
I have to give up nostalgia


It caused only Insomnia
Instead of hatred, I have to learn another word
And find a way out my monochrome world
Where even the wind lies
otherwise
Sooner or later I’ll be that forgotten story
Afterwards
Death melody will sign its victory
.................................................. .....
HOPE YOU 4LL LIKE IT
IF U FIND OUT ANY MISTAKE PLZ TELL ME

[Maria Rap 4 Ever]

wonderful
i liked it so much

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

my favorite type of poems
^^
i'mma read carefully and come back to comment

[نَازِكْ]

wonderful
i liked it so much
thanx sis alots for dropping by

[نَازِكْ]

my favorite type of poems
^^
i'mma read carefully and come back to comment


ah that's good
hope u 'll like it
you're welcome bro any time

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

ah that's good
hope u 'll like it
you're welcome bro any time

i definitely like it
no! ... i love it ^^ it's an amazing catchy piece of art
i'm so impressed
the way u express ur feelings and use the sad nature as a main element in ur poem .. makes it so special and different
congratulations sister
u're amazing
^^

[نَازِكْ]

i definitely like it
no! ... i love it ^^ it's an amazing catchy piece of art
i'm so impressed
the way u express ur feelings and use the sad nature as a main element in ur poem .. makes it so special and different
congratulations sister
u're amazing
^^


thank ya brother for dropping by your words mean a lots for me
indeed i was trying to reflect ma heart, my thoughts my soul honastly
nah i'm not that much good i'm just trying ^^

[Black_Poison]

WoW WoW...and WoooooW
Victora....you really amaaaaaaaaazed me
really...felt every word flows inside my heart and melt and get mixt up with blood drops and flows slowly...slowly in veines
i reaaaaaaally liked it....you are a diver
it's ok to dive in...as long as you remember to comeback to the surface and take another breath....then dive deeper to reach your aim
Good job
Carry on

[نَازِكْ]

WoW WoW...and WoooooW
Victora....you really amaaaaaaaaazed me
really...felt every word flows inside my heart and melt and get mixt up with blood drops and flows slowly...slowly in veines
i reaaaaaaally liked it....you are a diver
it's ok to dive in...as long as you remember to comeback to the surface and take another breath....then dive deeper to reach your aim
Good job
Carry on
oh sis it dosent worth at all
it's just my nosens khh
a diver ; but i'm afraid of drowning cus at somepoint u 'll lose ur breath
just like revenge at somepoint u wont be able to stop
otherwise if there's someone wait for u in the surface and if that one thinks about u , u'll deeply return
but i'll dive to reach my aim yes i'll
thnx sis thanx alot
yeah thank ya sweetheart

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

thank ya brother for dropping by your words mean a lots for me
indeed i was trying to reflect ma heart, my thoughts my soul honastly
nah i'm not that much good i'm just trying ^^

and it's indeed reflected in every single line
and don't say u're just trying ... u're over trying ... cuz these poem says how professional u r

[نَازِكْ]

and it's indeed reflected in every single line
and don't say u're just trying ... u're over trying ... cuz these poem says how professional u r


i 'm really speechless
cus no onr tells me that be4
so thank ya brother
may ALLAH bless you

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

i 'm really speechless
cus no onr tells me that be4
so thank ya brother
may ALLAH bless you

u're so wlcm sister
may ALLAH bless u too
^^

[شمــوس]

Death melody
I used to hear the winds whisper
Telling me your story won’t wither
I used to watch the rains fall
But every time my tears turn into a waterfall
And with every fallen tear
A symphony of loneliness spread in ma ear
Washing away ma fear
Yeah;that melody was s so clear
But gloomy clouds were drawing near
Now all what I hear is a tearful voice as my heart is fading away
In that mire of hatred I’m astray
There; I’m drowning ,my horizon vanishes away
Inside me, a tornado is about to form
That voice is going on
As the life gives me a curse
Having no choice of course
It makes me realize, that voice is mine
Looking around ,every thing seems fine
But silent wraps its self around me
My misted eyes are hurting me
I wanna hear that symphony
There’s no doubt it’ll calm me
But I still hear myself crying
Telling me: you are dying
It’s singing a death melody
Every tune expresses a tragedy
I hear it over and over
I just want it to be over
Now it’s saying:
“a heart full of hatred someday will blow up
Happiness you are looking for you’ll never catch it up
Your dream, your story Tragically will wind up
I’m losing my breath
I just wanna a break
I wonder, how far can I keep stepping forward?
The past is a dead memory, why can’t i understand?
I have to give up nostalgia


It caused only Insomnia
Instead of hatred, I have to learn another word
And find a way out from my monochrome world
Where even the wind lies
otherwise
Sooner or later I’ll be that forgotten story
Afterwards
Death melody will sign its victory
.................................................. .....
HOPE YOU 4LL LIKE IT
IF U FIND OUT ANY MISTAKE PLZ TELL ME
SALAM ALLAH
Came to die songs
Greek hysteria
Brought to life again
Excellent Intissar

[نَازِكْ]

SALAM ALLAH
Came to die songs
Greek hysteria
Brought to life again
Excellent Intissar


وعليكم السلام
oh my presious sister is here
thnk you sister for passing it cheers me up
n_________n

[Asolvip]

Fantastic ... I swear I could feel the words touching my heart .. Cool

[نَازِكْ]

Fantastic ... I swear I could feel the words touching my heart .. Cool
ah thanx sister
¨^______________¨^

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

No no no no no
don't repeat it again...there is no mistake here except a two words you though they're rhyming together they're the Curse- Ofcourse the pronunciation is diffrent but the whole context is woooow and the lines are perfect the theme is the best so congratulation you're one the chosen trust me good luck and may allah helps you inshalah ^^

[نَازِكْ]

No no no no no
don't repeat it again...there is no mistake here except a two words you though they're rhyming together they're the Curse- Ofcourse the pronunciation is diffrent but the whole context is woooow and the lines are perfect the theme is the best so congratulation you're one the chosen trust me good luck and may allah helps you inshalah ^^

AH THAT'S GOOD SO I PASSED MY EXAM
thank ya brother so much ;indeed i 'm bad in dealing with rhythm
i told u i 'll learn from you all
it's a honor for me that u like it
may ALLAH help you an bless you

[~سلسبيل~]

slm salma
what's up it have been a while i miss ya soo much ma sweetheart
sorry i didn't call you for a long time
i'm not home now i'm in bouira but when i'll come back i'll come and see u it's a apromise
well i' m mad at you i used to be the first who read your writings but this one i didn't read it be4
but i like it
keep it up

[نَازِكْ]

oh i can't believe it what are u doing here ?,
i was absent for 3 days then i find such a good surprise
i have to say sorry cus i forgot yor birthday how could i forgot myonly friend birth day i'm a bad person
millions of sorry
hmm you're in bouira means you're preparing for your sister wedding have fun

[أم دعاء 2]

Hi

Really your melody looks like a beautiful drawing that offers to the soul a harmonious peace

[نَازِكْ]

Hi

Really your melody looks like a beautiful drawing that offers to the soul a harmonious peace


ah thanx for the beautiful comment sister
and welcome betwwen us