For the jalous people .. Just kill them

[Asolvip]

You can see that the life is so nice
When you watch the white clouds in the sky
You feel so frozen like ice
When the whole world make you cry
You don't have to care because they are like snoopy mice
When they find a piece of cheese they feel like they are about to fly
You don't have to give them all your cheese(smile) just give them a slice*
When they eat it , they will die

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

the so cool one but you need to expand this masterpiece so great one i mean words hehe but hey I'm not Jealous hhhhhh Just kidding

[Asolvip]

Thx bro! I wrote only yesterday bcuz I felt so bored and I hadn't a thing to talk about ... May be I'll continue it and I know you are not jalous bcuz your better than me I confess it Hhhhhh

[yousrayousra77]

well done girl keep it up

[Asolvip]

Thank you so much ... I appreciate your opinion :)

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Thx bro! I wrote only yesterday bcuz I felt so bored and I hadn't a thing to talk about ... May be I'll continue it and I know you are not jalous bcuz your better than me I confess it Hhhhhh

No no I don't feel jealous about writing coz I just write to deliver my message I don't need a nothing more and being around here is kinda cool and makes me enrich my vocabulary and getting some new words you know I want to ask you since when you started to write? if it was so recently so you don't rush to judge your ability everything come with practice believe it okay good luck

[Asolvip]

Well I used to write my diaries since 4 grade in middle school and only this year I started writing because I went to university and I felt bored ... I'm trying to do my best