Hard life

[Asolvip]

I've lost myself
And I've lost my aim
I don't even remember what's my name ?
Today and yesterday are not the same
But who's the one you're going to blame?
Why have they changed? Are they looking for fame?
This is completely a shame
They were fool when they came*
Now they are burning like fire flame
They became serious and also curious
And this is so hilarious
They entered in people's business
And they stole all their happiness*
For me, they are such an illness*
They wanted to kill
But I won't lose my will
And I'll stand still
I won't feel that thrill
And I'll reach the dreams that once I wanted to fulfill*

[Katy Pretty girl]

i realy luv what u write
u'r topics
u'r words
u'r rythme
so nice
keep it up

[حميد.ص]

Thank you..............

[Asolvip]

Thx my awesome friend ... I'll write more for you and you can check all my poems here .. I've published them :)

[Katy Pretty girl]

yes
i saw u'r account in ......
and i luvd u'r page and u'r poems
good job

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Another one so beautiful keep it up haaaaa you're so active mashaa allah

[Asolvip]

I wish I could keep writing more & more but I want my poems to be special like masterpieces Hhhhh thank u bro .. Ur work also is nice

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Okaaay I hope that of course

[Asolvip]

Well didn't u check this poem about palestine
http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1331887
Just have a look

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

I was reading it coz I found it complicated lil bit I don't know i became less smart these days

[Asolvip]

Hhhh .. U are smart ... So smart .. So don't worry .. You are always the best

[Black_Poison]

WoooooooooooooW
yep ^^ Amazingly amazing hun
keep it up....you 'll never lose your way
if you can make it through the night there will be a better day
Just live life like living a dream
cuz you're the star among the team
Next time when you forget your name...i'll be here
To tell you you are the VIP Abir

Just keep it up and let the rhymes rain
and let release all that pain

Peace yo

[Asolvip]

Wow cool ...
I know that every finished line is the beginning of new race
I forgot my name but I didn't forget the smile that u once drew on my face
I was always down but guys you raised me up
And you let me stand up
So I gotta a lot in my pocket and gotta show it up
You are the best friends ever , that's why I picked you up

[Asolvip]

I still got more & and more
But they are hidden behind my secret door
I lost its key but I find it from time to time thrown on my golden floor
So don't be surprised if I am the best
I'll use my imagination and leave for you the rest
Don't be shocked .. Because my words will dig your chest hhhh

[Black_Poison]

Wow cool ...
I know that every finished line is the beginning of new race
I forgot my name but I didn't forget the smile that u once drew on my face
I was always down but guys you raised me up
And you let me stand up
So I gotta a lot in my pocket and gotta show it up
You are the best friends ever , that's why I picked you up


They say life goes on and on
Since i'm your sis i'll never let you alone
You're another rose in my garden
In the world of dreams of Black Poison
Where there is no chance for deceiving
Just beautiful rainbows...i'm beleiving
I made a wish on a shotting star
May Allah protect you where ever you are

^________^

[Asolvip]

Sister i wish you could be with me forever
And make me smile and laughing is better
In your garden we grow like twin flowers
And we can hold in no matter what was the weather
Your support made me feel stronger
And I realized that my way is going to be longer and longer
I hope we can achieve our dreams one after the other
And we stay friends sticking to eathother
Forever better together (^_−)−☆

[Black_Poison]

I wish i could forever stay
and just take all your pain away
but...i've got somewhere to belong
and my whole life won't be that long
so ...we'll be rhymed in a cute song
about how this freind were strong
and we will sing it all along
ignoring life when it turns wrong
i'm already written as a twin
and taking that seat will be just a sin
so....i've got for you more space in my heart
and for a new sisterhood too start
promise me we'll never be apart
your beautiful soul is breathing art
^_______^
I love walking on the.steps of a rhyme
I hope we'll be doing it all the time

[Asolvip]

You are so innocent
My heart is for you 100 per cent
You broke all my dark walls
And you made my nightmare falls
It became a sweet dream
And I'm having fun to taste it like ice-cream
And my heart is sending you a scream
My black poison ... Your rhymes are so cute
I can feel it's tone even it's mute
It sounds like Someone is playing flute
Wearing a black hat and black classic suit
And that my type of my fairy tale man
People criticize me but they don't understand
That I'm better than them....

[Asolvip]

My black poison ... This is sth funny I wrote it about Justin bieber after he had that car accident ;)
I just got out of ma favorite bar
Im drunk , I don't care I'm driving my car
Selena I'll get you where ever you are
Because I'm a super star
Outch! I hit something
I don't care cuz I'm super staaaar
Selena , go to heaven , go to hell , I'll get your hearrt.... " you told me to come and get it "
I believe that you left me fall aparrrt
Mom ... I'm falling apart in the hands of the poliiice
I feel like I'm in wonderland like Aliiice
Good bye my life ... I don't care I'm the new michel jakson( even his daughter Paris hates me )
ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(;￣◇￣)┘
♪( ´θ｀)ノ
(( _ _ ))..zzzZZ bye

[Black_Poison]

My black poison ... This is sth funny I wrote it about Justin bieber after he had that car accident ;)
I just got out of ma favorite bar
Im drunk , I don't care I'm driving my car
Selena I'll get you where ever you are
Because I'm a super star
Outch! I hit something
I don't care cuz I'm super staaaar
Selena , go to heaven , go to hell , I'll get your hearrt.... " you told me to come and get it "
I believe that you left me fall aparrrt
Mom ... I'm falling apart in the hands of the poliiice
I feel like I'm in wonderland like Aliiice
Good bye my life ... I don't care I'm the new michel jakson( even his daughter Paris hates me )
ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(;￣◇￣)┘
♪( ´θ`)ノ
(( _ _ ))..zzzZZ bye
hhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i'm laughing my stomach out
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i was never expecting such thing hhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
i mean....i'm a hater.....i damn hate them both
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
but....Alice in wonderland of police hhhhhhhhhhhh
this is something i would never think about
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
oooooooooooh....god damn it
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
euuuuuuuuh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

[Black_Poison]

You are so innocent
My heart is for you 100 per cent
You broke all my dark walls
And you made my nightmare falls
It became a sweet dream
And I'm having fun to taste it like ice-cream
And my heart is sending you a scream
My black poison ... Your rhymes are so cute
I can feel it's tone even it's mute
It sounds like Someone is playing flute
Wearing a black hat and black classic suit
And that my type of my fairy tale man
People criticize me but they don't understand
That I'm better than them....


This is really sweet from you
i think the same about you too
No body understands ...no one will do
the dreamers like us became soo few
so...never mind ...and i guess your prince is cute
Even though i hate the sound of flute
hhhhh

[Asolvip]

Well ... From your poems I feel like you are living a nightmare
Like you are in a dark castle and you can't breathe air
But always at the end you become bright
And you find your way directly to the shiny light
I can give ten out of ten
Even the context was difficult to understand
I wish u could find the right man
And your hand sticks to his hand
..... I'm silly ... I love you my sister

[Black_Poison]

Talking about nightmares...my nightmares are living me
every night...every damn night...i can't fall asleep without i see
another horrific face staring at my face
and...the voices....those damn voices screaming ...runing in a race
who can make this girl go insane
who can make her cry the darkest rain
who will give her most the deepest pain
who will make her sacrifices in vain
just....nobody can see it through my world
Those just the fewest line ...tellin one world
In my kingdome...there ...lives the three
named....i ....myself....and me
i'm just a beleiver in destiny
i never expected more than it meant to be
Life has thought me...and i'm a good student
keep your heart clean....keep your soul innocent
my kingdom doesn't need a king
my dream is not a golden ring
I'm aiming ...so far away
so high that even birds are astray
My dream... Does worth he strife
My dream....is beyond death
and....i'm giving it every single breath
But....your words are sweet
i love you sister...with a heart beat
^____________^
my dream...is beyond life

[Asolvip]

Well sister
I'm always sitting alone in a dark world
Waiting for someone to come and give me a hold
I want to feel the warmth because my weather is so cold
My soul has been already sold
To my pen when it wrote the first word I told
It wrote ... Black poison in bold
To show me that she is my twin butterfly
She always wipes my tears when I cry
And she gives me rain when I feel dry
She courages me to live and not die
If u fall she says .. Don't give up , just try
If I become sad .. She wonders : why?!
And I know she loves me and she never says to me good bye

[Asolvip]

Well sister
I'm always sitting alone in a dark world
Waiting for someone to come and give me a hold
I want to feel the warmth because my weather is so cold
My soul has been already sold
To my pen when it wrote the first word I told
It wrote ... Black poison in bold
To show me that she is my twin butterfly
She always wipes my tears when I cry
And she gives me rain when I feel dry
She courages me to live and not die
If u fall she says .. Don't give up , just try
If I become sad .. She wonders : why?!
And I know she loves me and she never says to me good bye

[Asolvip]

Well sister
I'm always sitting alone in a dark world
Waiting for someone to come and give me a hold
I want to feel the warmth because my weather is so cold
My soul has been already sold
To my pen when it wrote the first word I told
It wrote ... Black poison in bold
To show me that she is my twin butterfly
She always wipes my tears when I cry
And she gives me rain when I feel dry
She courages me to live and not to die
If I fall she says .. Don't give up , just try
If I become sad .. She wonders : why?!
And I know she loves me and she never says to me good bye

[Black_Poison]

Well...i'm happy to have you my dear
your words touch my heart and gave me a smiling tear
i can hear them whispering in my ear
Begging me to stay as i slowly disappear
I'll be here sister...i'll be facing your fears
Just let it out ...and i'm gonna cry for your tears
As...we are sisters means we have a heart to share
and there's always someone to listen and care
and to lift heavy weights that you couldn't bear
i'm praying to allah to make me a good sister
to bring the rainbows after a lonv rainy winter
Just...hold on...i'll nevr let you go
Running away is not my thing you know

[hiba-2012-]

so nice
your participation is appreciated

[Black_Poison]

Hey Hiba....is my participation appreciated as well? I'm confused sis

[hiba-2012-]

oh darling ... ur participation is the most appreciated among all
n__n

[Black_Poison]

Awwww...thank you hun....it's so cute of you....
And....your participations are aaaaallllllll appreciated
n________n

[hiba-2012-]

thank you very much
n_____________n

[Black_Poison]

You're welcome sister
n__________________n

[Asolvip]

Well...i'm happy to have you my dear
your words touch my heart and gave me a smiling tear
i can hear them whispering in my ear
Begging me to stay as i slowly disappear
I'll be here sister...i'll be facing your fears
Just let it out ...and i'm gonna cry for your tears
As...we are sisters means we have a heart to share
and there's always someone to listen and care
and to lift heavy weights that you couldn't bear
i'm praying to allah to make me a good sister
to bring the rainbows after a lonv rainy winter
Just...hold on...i'll nevr let you go
Running away is not my thing you know

Your words stole the sadness which sticks to my back
I'm sure they are taking it away so it never goes back
Your words dance in my mouth as I spell them
I wish I could sing them
Because these words are my happiness
They contain your craziness
Your support means so much to me
Like no one has ever done this for me
I wish you're satisfied with me
You're similar to a red rose
Which drinks blood so it grows
And breathe the fresh air when we open our windows ( hearts)
And it's proud of itself even that pain that it swallows
When Kids throw it with their childish arrows
I wish that one day that rose flies like a swallow
And comes and sleep on my pillow
So I can smell it
And touch it
And feel it <3
☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆