My blessed earth "Palestine "

[Asolvip]

I go back in time to those sweet memories
I feel I can touch them; I'll write about them some stories
To show my happiness at that time
Before I become sad after I did that crime
When I was creeping on the floor
Crying and screaming for more
For more of what?!
For more of secure , because you hurt me and I needed a cure
Sorry, you've lost your mom and dad
He said, you don't have to be sad
Because they were already dead
You are such a liar
I wish you would be burnt by fire
He laughed , then he tried to shoot me
But with the power of Allah , he couldn't get me
I did, after I said I believe in the creator not in his creation
To kill me, it's just a nightmare in your imagination
I took a rock from my blessed earth then I threw it
With the deepest power of loving my Palestine*
It went in a straight line
To the head of the criminal
To teach him that we are the original

And because that girl was muslim and innocent , she felt bad because she killed a person even he is a criminal*

[Asolvip]

It is a bit complicated so:
The girl who said : you are such a liar
And when she said , I did she meant I did get him ( kill him)
I hope you like it

[Katy Pretty girl]

the words r so deep
and in rythme
and i liked the story
it's pretty much real
and i luvd it
keep it up
u'r so good

[Asolvip]

Thank you my friend .. Just wait for my new poems ...

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

I found complicated lil bit to understand but I read it more than twice
the title is My blessed Palestine
I thought you are going to talk about the history of Pure place of Palestine anyway

[Asolvip]

Well for moments this poem was about to be about parents ... And how they treat their kids but I got the idea when I saw my edited picture about Palestine then I got this story in my mind ... I wish I could write more about Palestine

[Asolvip]

Well for moments this poem was about to be about parents ... And how they treat their kids but I got the idea when I saw my edited picture about Palestine then I got this story in my mind ... I wish I could write more about Palestine

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Well for moments this poem was about to be about parents ... And how they treat their kids but I got the idea when I saw my edited picture about Palestine then I got this story in my mind ... I wish I could write more about Palestine



taht's the bad think normally you should carry on the same topic you started first but it's okay we still learn it's a big trouble you know

[Asolvip]

The problem is , I couldn't write about bad treatment because my parents treat le the right way ! I hadn't any ideas .. I'll use my imagination again ... ♪just me and my imagination~

[Black_Poison]

My blessed Palestine
^___________^
We finally got it
you told me once about this
i'll read it well...then i'll comment
keep it up...you're tallened

[Asolvip]

Thx for the compliment ... You're the best Sis (*^_^*)

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

The problem is , I couldn't write about bad treatment because my parents treat le the right way ! I hadn't any ideas .. I'll use my imagination again ... ♪just me and my imagination~

That's a must but be realist too!!!

[Asolvip]

I just wrote one of my best poems... Imagine! Hhh I'll publish it

[tuba amani]

perfect cute amazing
mükemmel sevimli şaşırtıcı
superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

[Asolvip]

Thank u my sister
teşekkür ederim

[khelifi72]

OMG ! I never thought that my little sister can be that talented girl .... Ya Allah ... You are the perfect sister ... May Allah bless you , and keep you for me and for the family , it's absolutely perfect ... Keep on my Lil sister and I'm sure I will help you to be the best writer ever .

[Asolvip]

A big thanks to the best big bro !
You are also my perfect big bro
You taught me things I didn't know
And u always raise me from low
I wish u could stay by my side
And join me In my hard ride
And visit the world wide :)

[أم دعاء 2]

SALAM;

I like it .
I can feel your words and your presence between the lines
your pen played an important role in translating your honest feelings.
Go ahead

[Asolvip]

Thank u so much my friend .. If u like it vote for it :)

[ghaza_01]

GREAT
big kiss for palestine

[Asolvip]

Thank you :)
I really appreciate your support