Feeling alone ... Poem

[Asolvip]

It's really boring to be alone
It looks like you are listening to a song without a tone
And your heart is like a stone
You feel like you are bad to the bone
But what should you do in a cruel world?
You are invisible to everybody
You just wish to be somebody
People pay you attention
And they make with you some connection
They wipe your tear
And they call you dear
But you just need to appear
Like a strong person with a power of bear
So you can get over this atmosphere

[نَازِكْ]

well done
like it thnx

[Asolvip]

Ur welcome sweetie I should thank u for ur complement

[Black_Poison]

Omg
what was that...you're really feeling it girl
well....i like the poem...you're tallented with no doubts
for the context
Loneliness....isn't always bad
sometimes...you need to sit in the corner...to have a better view on the world...to learn..and just wait for the rigjt moment
sometimes...being alone...keeps you away from so many mistakes that you could've done with ppl around
being alone...makes one more wise...you'll have enougj time to talk to your self..and think deep...way too deep
Being alone...can bring you away from so much hurt that you don't need
So...you're alone...cuz you're special
^^
Be thankful for it...there is a bright side after all

[Asolvip]

Well I always say in the deep of my heart the words u've just said , well now I'm stronger than ever to face any obstacle comes in my way ... And I Know and sure that Ive built my personality through time I spent it alone thinking and crying ... Btw now I feel much better hhhh

[The Gang]

Hey Girl look...I was so popular once but now i'm alone and I learnt the lesson that I should have learnt before which is No trust and to expect that there would be a day that i would find myself alone and for really it happened and I'm alone with that .......keep it up Girl you deserve better.

[Asolvip]

U dont have to be Alone , u r included in our talented world .. So we r here for u .. As u and my cool friends here stand for me ... We r not alone ... We r special !

[Black_Poison]

Hey Girl look...I was so popular once but now i'm alone and I learnt the lesson that I should have learnt before which is No trust and to expect that there would be a day that i would find myself alone and for really it happened and I'm alone with that .......keep it up Girl you deserve better.



Hey bro....you know what
i'll pretend i didn't read this
and.....good to know that...this sister is invisible and insignificant
you said i'm your lil sister

just....keep your head up brother

[blue.sky]

very good job

i like it

[Asolvip]

Thank you so much ... Just wait for more hhhh

[blue.sky]

hhhh okay i'm waiting

[Asolvip]

Owh , u can read them , in members writing, they are already published :)

[سلامي مرادي]

ur writing is great. but this few words are a storm of philosophy

It's not boring to be alone
sometimes it 's good to be alone . to arrange ur thougth .

we do need the others
appraisal

we need

self-confidence

thank u a lot for the sub I like it.

[Asolvip]

Of course we need the others in our lives but the one we need and love
And it's good for us to stay alone for a while to think well and organise our ideas and to know ourselves very well.. And thanks

[Asolvip]

Loneliness .. Is just a word ... But when you feel it , it becomes a world