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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : One summer night


Asolvip
2013-06-02, 10:25
One summer night
I turned off the light
I put my head on my pillow
And started flying like a swallow
In my deep dreams that never come real
It got into my mind, it's so ideal
But this is what I could feel
I dreamt like you were sitting next to me
Holding me tight, singing for me to calm me down
Wiping my tears and say: baby don't cry
I promise you to never tell you good bye
Next to you I will stay till I die
It was so truthful, in the same time so hurtful
To see her looking at you and you did the same
I knew that you wanted to be with her, it's your aim
Your heart shook when you were staring at her
Then you let me, and you started going towards her
I felt terrible for moments, even though I smiled
I trusted you, I believed you but you were wild
But I love you, that's why I only wish the best for you
I hope that you spend nice life with her
But I advise you to take care of her
All she needs is your protection
And don't forget to give her your full attention
I looked at them and I smiled with eyes full of tears
Saying to him: good bye my lover, I'll be yours forever
Maybe in another life I would be your girl
But don't forget, you were always my Angel and my expensive pearl
Then I woke up with a tear dropping on my cheek
A sweet sound ran into my ear, calling my name; Abeer!
It's him shouting: I'm so sorry dear!
I was wrong, I swear I won't repeat it, and this is certainly clear

little marizzel
2013-06-02, 10:40
that's a great poem..pretty exciting..the end was the best..Well done
Keep it up

Asolvip
2013-06-02, 10:58
Thank you , I still have more poems I'll try to publish each one everyday about love , friendship and life..

Asolvip
2013-06-02, 11:01
Well the rules of the website is not to publish other websites or blogs that's why I can't give you the link of my blog .. It contains the most of my poems .. And I'm writing now new ones :)

bouchra bou
2013-06-02, 12:39
wow wonderful poeme
i congratulate you for ur words
waiting for more

Asolvip
2013-06-02, 16:58
Nchallah .. The rest is the best .... I'm nit thanking myself but I'm proud of myself , writing poems helps me so much to get out of my sadness and isolation .. I feel like I did great job and its an honor to find great friends like you to rate my work .. Thank you