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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Lost friendship by AbirSolZayn


Asolvip
2013-06-01, 21:07
I'm looking for you everywhere
But where are you? I can't find you there
There, in our secret place
Where we used to meet face to face
I really missed you, I'm suffering without you
So would you please come back?
Come on my sweet friendship
Get my friends back to my ship
And let's bring back our old relationship
Because I'm tired of being invisible
And being alone is irresistible
I want to be with them, it's sure
And now I can feel it, I'm so poor
I'm also sad! They left me here and they have gone
It's unbelievable that their time is done
But I really wish they would be next to me
In my hard time, standing with me
Wiping my tears and say: don't be sad
The people who hurt you will be all dead
Sleeping on the hell's beds

bouchra bou
2013-06-02, 12:45
nice words
congratulations
u look sad in ur poeme hope it's not how u feel in real
however friendship is the best relationship that any one of us can have
but loosing a friend is so hard or even beeing betrayed from a friend
nd talking bout lonliness
i hate beeing alone without friends around nd guess it's same thing for u
congratulations again
keep up
waiting for other poems

Asolvip
2013-06-02, 17:01
Thx sweetie , just wait for more