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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : This is my first poem ♥♥♥


mimi best
2013-05-21, 16:51
hi my freinds how are u !!!!!!!


I wish from u like this first poem I
wrote and I love it very much




I hate the most boys …..
How thinking they can get any girl…..
I feel that I am the onely girl ………..
.....will never get her any boy ……..

They think me I am easy ……
Because they found me like a crazy………
…………that’s all I am not……………
I just pretend to know how the boy I can change it from hard to easy………
And broke his hard daily……………
And prove to him how is the easy………….
…………………..me or him………………………..
Of cours him .beecouse I am the onely girl will never get her easy ……..




byyyyyyyyye mu freinds

i hope u like it

:1::1::1::1::1::1::1:

mimi best
2013-05-21, 17:43
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sam016
2013-05-21, 23:49
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not bad

mimi best
2013-05-22, 16:09
10x my friend

رنيم الجزائر
2013-05-25, 12:22
i like it

keep it up sister

but if you allow me thre are liiiiiiiiiiiiiiittle mistakes

but don't wory everybody makes mistakes



I hate the majority of boys …..
How thinking they can get any girl…..
I feel that I am the only girl ………..
.....that will never be gotten by any boy……..

They think that I am easy ……
Because they found me like a crazy………
…………No i'm not from that sort……………
or
............ Definetly that's not me..............
I just pretend to know how i can change the boy from hard to easy………
And break his hard daily……………
And prove to him who is the easy………….
…………………..me or him………………………..
Of course him .beecouse I am the only girl that will never be gotten easy ……..

i hope you accept my changes and i hope also that you're not mad of me

try others and each time you'll learn from your mistakes and you'll make a terrific poem

your best friend