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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : poem=the story of us


safiabla
2013-04-20, 07:46
in someplace , the story begins
in some where , is the adresse
it is starts like that
three little girls met and loved
they became freinds
they share evrything in evry end
even in hardships they never give up
they care one anathor, they anderstand
the little girls grow up
they met people and met
two go,one rests
but ,they still loved
she blames them
they blame her
the other she doesn't know who believe
the problem large and large
tho can fix this up
this is the story of the three little girls
this is the story of us

i write this poem because i have a big problem with my friend,and that because of some people and what they say,i hope you like my poem

براهيم جموعي
2013-05-01, 11:33
it is good

i hope you can fix the problems with your friend

good luck :19:

لبيبة المسلمة
2013-05-01, 14:49
really nice

keep it up

thanks

chouchou23.22
2013-05-23, 22:06
Great poem and I wish to fix your problem