Let's create a poem, together

[قلوب حزينة]

I have remarked that most of the members in the English and frensh ********s forum are interested in poetry...So I decided to set up this topic of writing a collective poem...By this way we will join all the capacities and have a very wonderfull and beautiful poem:19:
Like what we are doing on our fairy tale**in the title Lets creat a fairy tale, together** we will do the same
each one is asked to write a verse , that should be meaningful and in relation with its prceding one..it should follow the same rhyme and rhythm
We should first select a theme or a subject to our poem...I want you to suggest and select a subject...and later on we will together select a title...our work shoul be a pure collective work..ok?? i:)

[Mohamed]

Hi friend! it's a great idea, thanks a lot! I really want to propose a subject but I don't know if the others will accept it! I think love is the best thing to write about, but let's wait for other propositions

[قلوب حزينة]

yeah, LMD-LEE, it is a good idea but we should wait for others to give their openions
This is a list of suggestions.. you can all agree about one of them ..In case you didnt liked them you could suggest another list with new themes...ok?? So what do you think of
Our religion which we had shown it in a bad picture to the rest of the word-
Our prophet who we have failed him-
Our Quran which we had left, upon our disks, to dust-
Mother-
Father-
Grand parents--hahahah- I havnt met any poem about grandmother or grandfather, I wonder why, ??they diserve to speak about them, dont they
Our country**Algeria**Bladna-
Our forums**Djalfa forums** they do desrve a poem-
Freindship if it really exists-
Pease which we really miss nawadays-
Life if we are really living-
Knowledge which had lost its weight-
love, if it has left the poems and the fairy tales and becomes real-
My list has not finished yet it is so long, I dont want to carry on now...I want to see other suggestions
So come on lets start

[Mohamed]

Hi again dear friend! You know what, all the subjects that you propose are good, and very interesting. But for me I have never written a poem about on of these subjects in English. If you want I will do it this time, but I still want to know the opinion of the other members

[bchouli]

For me i've never composed a poem
neither in english nor in any other ********s
thus i won't be among you
i'm so sorry

[حنا090ن]

hello all
let s creat a poem about death and crimes or killers
what do u think?

[حنا090ن]

hi
i was just kiding with u
i think that your idea wich is talk about our country -Algeria is amazing or about the
-Algerien people
if u dont mind i will start with
Our people are so brave and strong
They have a big history so powerful and long
u r next thnx

[Mohamed]

Apparently, finding the subject is more difficult than writing the whole poem lol

[قلوب حزينة]

Hi LMD-ENGLISH or LEE or ALGERIA I c that you like to change your nickname...good
I want to ask you about the lines written by HANANE090
I think we should write about the Algerian people

[ath111]

This is my poem
My Soul
Yesterday,I was told
he would leave to Algiers
He would leave in a cold
weather far to the tears
So,I got sorry and sold
my brave heart to the fears.
........................................
I got my breath back and left
to meet my friend in the way
Fearing the fact that he left
in a given night or on a given day.
.................................................. ..
In my way to the way
that my friend would follow
I was lost,I would say
if I knew I'd be so
Let him go,let him pay
the bill of all my sorrow.
.................................................
Then,I stopped a moment and said
it's my friend,it's my soul
It's my body,it's my head
it's my heart,it's my whole.
.................................................. .
I kept on walking hopefully
on a winter day in the street
Slowly sometimes,and sometimes hurriedly
though the objection of my feet.
.................................................. ................
Sorry my feet,I'll go on
whether you like it or not
cause my friend has won
the battle that I've lost
Once he left,he really won
once he left,I really lost.
.................................................. ..........
In my way to the way
that my friend would follow
A voice called to clearly say
I'm still the one that you know
What you heard yesterday
about me was blow
.................................................. .......
Could you imagine I'd stay
without you? soory,no!
Let's stay,or go away
to another place where we sow
the seed of love that only may
find a land where to grow
.................................................. ..
I am you and you are me
as the soul is the one
Can the one without soul be
or can the soul with no one run?
.................................................. .....
If all friends were true friends
to sadness,we'd say "bye
If all lovers were true lovers
no one,then,would ever cry

[Mohamed]

As you like my friend! I've changed my ID only one time lol LLE has the same meaning as English lol But u know, writing about algerian people is not easy

[حنا090ن]

i think this poem will be finished after 100 years later

[حنا090ن]

looooooooooooool

[faith]

hello algerians ,remember that we are among you and our participations require a common topic ,a topic that serves our cooperation and union,so it is a call to leave your nuts and be more extroverted . the topic of belonging may go beyond algerians to an arabic framewofk ,we have common identity, beliefs and values .values of our muslim and arabic roots , please shed light on things where other can be a center of interest and can display and express their atittudes rather than mere evaluting your works.let's work together and get rid of our self centering.

[قلوب حزينة]

Hi faith..you should know that for this reason I have posted this subject
the collective poem or the collective story are a way of training Arabs, the visitors of this forums, to work together as a single person

[bila00b]

This is why i don't like arabs... they argument and fight about anything so let's be cool and wright a poem about love ... i will start by this and you complete

Nice touch under my skin
Beatiful hand ..so thin

[sabiha18]

Bil is right let's agree on one thing and staaaaaaaaaaart the poem
about love...it's a good idea indeed

[Tsukikaze]

It stikes you as a lightnin'
But, it enters your body and stays within