تسجيل الدخول

مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Heart Beats


the fly boy
2013-03-26, 01:16
Peace be upon u all
this is a poem I wrote to a friend of mine which
start giving up so i hope it will help ma friend and any one
have the same feeling




Heart Beats
Stop for a moment and try to listen carefuly
Listen to that sound it is inside it is there deeply
It is the heart beats the sign that you still alive
They are the reason you breath you still survive
Maybe you are in pain you wanna give it all up
But don't this ain't the end find a way to get up
Maybe you think you are weak you feel so sick
But hey there always a open door for you to seak
Maybe you think it's all over you feel like you can't
But you're wrong you always can get what you want
Maybe you think that the good is not gonna come
I think you are strong and you can akways overcome
You think that this is not good this is not alright
but you gotta hold you gotta stand and keep fight
coz you know what …….
As long as you can still hear and feel your heart beat
There's a new chance there's nothing you can't beat
everything gonna be better everything will be right
Coz there is a bright new day after every dark night
We may lose sometimes and yes we all somtimes fail
Well it doesn't matter…..
As long we get up again and try again try to leave a trail
it doesn't matter who you are or where are you going to
this what life is and what really matters is what you do ?

written by : B.O.Chou
The FlY BoY

Jimmy The Rap Soldie
2013-03-26, 02:16
woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
hey dear bro h r u doing?
wish u r doing super great
i loved ur work
it's amazing
i'll read well and carefully and come back comment
^^

the fly boy
2013-03-26, 11:46
thx bro
i'm cool thx 4 askin
hope the same 4 u
thx 4 passin
I appreciate it
^_^

سطايفية بكل فخر
2013-04-09, 18:01
hey u chou boy
i don't have any word to reply abt this
really its amazing
thx bro

لبيبة المسلمة
2013-05-01, 14:55
really nice

keep it up

thanks

Nihad lamis
2013-05-02, 13:21
ALLAH's peace ; mercy and blessings be upon you
thank you..............may ALLAH bless you ............nice words

بوقرة الزعيم
2013-05-04, 15:15
Good work bro
you are the best

Asolvip
2013-06-02, 18:33
Wow , it's amazing ... When I started reading I could not stop !! I felt those emotions and I really felt what u wanted to say from this cool poem , well I hope you could check mine ... I think you would love it .. +