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[wiwii_rock]

Can't Count the Tears

I've been awake for days- I can't sleep

The thought of losing you; Cuts me deep

My heart is crying out for you

Will I have- to come home to?

I need you here.

Right now I'm living in my darkest fear,

My head hurts- I can't stop the ringing in my ear.

It's feels like I'm crying blood instead of tears,

What the hell is happening to me- after all these years?

[رنيم الجزائر]

well rhymed

thanks a lot it is wonnnnnnderful

peace

[لبيبة المسلمة]

really nice

keep it up

thanks

[Katy Pretty girl]

great job
i liked the words
they sound deep
u did a wonderfull job
keep it up
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by the way i hope u vote in the competion

[أسير الطموح]

Well done :) Just go Ahead & keep it up

Ramadhan Moubarak

[Katy Pretty girl]

u should write more in the section of "members writing
keep it up

[fille algerie]

A wonderful poem ... thanks a lot sis
My regards

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

Short but well written .. Love it ;)
Keep up the good work ;

[white heart 12]

Thanks.It was amazing

[kacimo.samy]

wonderful words


keep it up
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ramadhan mobarak

[bouchra bou]

wonderful poem with deep meaning
keep it up u r doing great job

[Ai Usagi]

i can't understand this spart " will i have to come home too ?!! ur heart is full of pain and sorrow because you're gonna return to home , to be honest i can't understand that verse

[وشَـ،ـآحْ الـصـِـبـآا]

what a beautiful words ..
may i ask about the source or they are your own ..

thanks for sharing ..

[هيسواف اسلام]

nice poem ...... welll done

[FAN2013]

really great poem

[عليلي البشير]

:mh31:nice poem

[Akram Frahtia]

Yeah, can't count the tears