The bottom of the ocean✿

[Black Blossom]

good evening

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The bottom of the ocean
Last bubble float delivering the last breath
Last words, last dreams, last will of death
Bubbles of hopeless mouth’s air
Has reached the top screaming everybody she’s already there
A last tear lost helplessly in an ocean of black tears
A silent ending’s melody played inside her ears
Heart beats faded their temporarily harmony
Last symphony played with agony
All what said , been said
All what done, has done
No more time to change the mistakes
There’s only repentance and regret
No matter what it would takes
There’s only sigh’s reflect
Fatal fight in Two different worlds to get her cadaver
Overwhelming her soul, if her time is over
Only memories would warm her cold crying eyes
Only hopes pushs her heart that almost dies
IT’s time to be buried inside this liquid coffin
In the deepest cold tears she ll see her last role
Every morsel of her flesh commanded like a doll
Last smile shows barely as sunset’s light orient
Inside the poisonous bottom of the ocean
Take her beats close to your cold heart
Take her soul away with your eye’s bright..
Till the end
11/2/2013
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β–β
was here

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Hi black blossom i'd like to welcome you around here ... among ur new family .. wish u'll have much fun with us and i wish we'd be at the level of being great bros and sis's to u
welcome home
ur bro
jimmy
^^

ps:
i'll read carefully then come back to comment

[Black_Poison]

Omg
:'(
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:'(
:'(
:'(

[Black_Poison]

Welcome back Blossom
what a marvellous piece of writing you got there
just spoke of that hard situation.....delivering last breath
:'(
reminded me of how many times....i thought i reached that edge
i thought it was the last heavy breath that i deliver with the last cough
feels like drowning :'(

reminded me of how somebody's heart is bleeding in scilence
while standing with head up....drawing a fake smile and said
i'm fine
while he visits the world of dead everynight
and escapes ....with a miracle

reminded me of the promise ......i will never let you drown
we'll fight till last breath

:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( :'(
Till last breath

[Bouchra mimi]

Hey Black blossom , how are you dear
first welcome here between your second
family , hope you'll have a lot of fun

you wrote some of powerfull , amazing words

i read it till the end of it , i liked it

keep your hard work
waiting for your nexts

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Salam…its bro Karim how are you doing?

New Blossom welcome among your Brothers and Sisters wish you’ll enjoy your time interact and contribute in every topic of every section.

I’m impressed about what you have written it’s amazingly nice piece of art congratulation I promise you will bring nice works right here we’re supporting you.

[Black Blossom]

appreciating your re welcoming dears
that gave me courage and cheered my heart
Black Poison..you saying it right
my honor that you like my little peice of writing
:)

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[Black_Poison]

Lost btweet a tear and a deep smile my darling Blossom
what's written by people like us .....can only be understood by ppl like us
Keep writing my dear........let the darkness out in Blossoms
Black is beautiful
when it covers the mystery of a lighting soul
afraid of getting broken wings
the honor is mine sister

[worm]

Nice piece

always in the bottom of things XD
our lives and our choices like quantum trajectories are understood moment to moment at each point of intersection ,each encouner ,suggest a new potential direction
and this is obviously the result of our collaboration

[Black Blossom]

that's absolutly right
Dr goose
;)
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