the tune of death

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

this one is for people i hate
i wrote it since a long time but i guess it works
.
.
.

black..hell..i don't know where i'm
living

This is your turn to learn the lesson of listening

no smiles , no trust , no more lying

the least i was honest..but you show me the way of cheating

Damn..how could i believe that you were
amazing

you are dirty..silly..you are really desgasting
..
you'll test my revenge..
it's the tune of death..remember you are
nothing

you really don't know how much i'm daring

i'll be your ghost feel the way im hurting

body without a soul..without emotions

you'll never have an idea about the good feeling

here in my chest ..there is no heart

but there is the fire will let you burning

i'm the thunderstorm wich gonna destroy you

fast and easy..i'll end this suffering

you are good..i'm bad

you are an angel..i'm a devil

you give me flowers..i give thorns

i'll end this story ..without
happiness

without sadness..without justice

full of darkness..

i promise no forgiveness

it will be awful..with much evil

when i see you broken..i'll build my glory

when you die.. i'll cry

those are the tears of joy

beside your grave..i'll enjoy my victory

[Bouchra mimi]

it's the tune of death..remember you are
nothing

firstble i say i'm glad to the 1st one comment
what can i say honey i really can't find
words to describe my feelings for what you
wrote it's amazing , wonderful,strong
powrfull

i liked it a lote
keep your hard work you have
got amazing talent

see you

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

it's the tune of death..remember you are
nothing

firstble i say i'm glad to the 1st one comment
what can i say honey i really can't find
words to describe my feelings for what you
wrote it's amazing , wonderful,strong
powrfull

i liked it a lote
keep your hard work you have
got amazing talent

see you


im so happy u are the first one comments sweety :)
i really appreciate that !
thanx for supporting me you are soooo kind
you did well and your feelings are right in my heart
so thanx again ^_^
may allah bless you
c ya

[Bouchra mimi]

your welcome dear !!


that's my duty ,hhh

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

your welcome dear !!


that's my duty ,hhh

hhh that's cool !!
well done sis
it means we are deal :19:

[Bouchra mimi]

hhhhh yeah

i would like to know u if you dont mind

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

hhhhh yeah

i would like to know u if you dont mind

yeah sure i dnt mind

well let's start by my name
my name is Hajer n u can call me jojo ^^
im 18 years old frm N'gaous Batna
wht abt U sweety !?^^

[Bouchra mimi]

okay jojo i'm bouchra , 14 y.o

from ain defla i'm in the last year

in middle school

nice to meet you

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

okay jojo i'm bouchra , 14 y.o

from ain defla i'm in the last year

in middle school

nice to meet you


Ooh sunshine you're too young and too smart
great to have a nice and lovely friend like you
nice to meet u too
i wish u success in ur study ^^
Allah bless ya

[Bouchra mimi]

thanx dear , i'm really happy to know you

and i think that i'm gonna learn a lote from you

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

thanx dear , i'm really happy to know you

and i think that i'm gonna learn a lote from you

ooh come on girl !
im like your sister and im ready to help U anytime
okey lovely !

[Bouchra mimi]

HappY to know that

[cactus15]

hey girls what zap
i think i like ure revenge poem it's rock
once i wrote some stuffs like ures but now i'm done with it....
whatever good poem

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

hey girls what zap
i think i like ure revenge poem it's rock
once i wrote some stuffs like ures but now i'm done with it....
whatever good poem

helloo
hr u doing ?
i've learned a lesson too ..TO NEVER EVER TRUST PEOPLE
u can share ur poems if u dnt mind !!
anyway thx for passing

[cactus15]

yeah thnx 4 askin'
u know i've red some poems of ures n that ghotic vision i like it so much
ppl pretend all the time it's fine n runaway from truth witch is so hard to be accepted
to me the life is a big fat lie

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

yeah thnx 4 askin'
u know i've red some poems of ures n that ghotic vision i like it so much
ppl pretend all the time it's fine n runaway from truth witch is so hard to be accepted
to me the life is a big fat lie

u'r wlcm
well im not gothic
in fact i love hard rock n i always express my pain in that harsh way
there was a time when i cared abt ppl n damn things they say but not anymore
i jst live as i want n never care 4 wht they do never care 4 wht they say

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

hey sir u've to face tht big fat lie
fight fire by fire

[cactus15]

Oh yeah believe me i learned well how to live in this stupid life n gess wht the most lesson i've learned
"life never bakes the cake

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

Oh yeah believe me i learned well how to live in this stupid life n gess wht the most lesson i've learned
"life never bakes the cake

gr8 rly gr8
so kick this disgusting life away of ur way
n bake ur own cake :19:

[cactus15]

Thnx u r asssssuuuuum

[هاجر زهرة اللوتس]

wlcm ^^
u r cooooooooool
thx for passing
peace

[Black_Poison]

Avanger's soul can't find happiness....it always lives in past....it lives for one purpose....destruction....it can't be releived till the day of paying bills....
Anger....sadness...darkness...no mercy....no forgivness.....pay double for every tear....and only blood that can end the avanger's thirst.....
Congratulations Hadjet darling.....this poem was amazing...
I write about darkness too.....i write abt sadness....and i'm glad to read from your tallented hands

i'm glad you joined us.....
And keep it up



best wishes sister
Signed
B_P