My Poem: Sonnet 76

[Mohamed]

I've carried my heart in every season,
Walked under the sun, rain and snow,
I tried to find each new good reason,
Nothing but to remain a love's hero.

I fought for love, led a great legion,
I used the sword, the knife and bow,
Until the dead covered all my region,
And I had no choice but to let it go.

When all battlefields lead to treason,
The horizon is dark, coloured sorrow,
When the main fight is without vision,
I am sorry but I just can't live in woe.

I've had enough of wars, I want peace,
I'm not Achilles and this is not Greece.

Sonnet 76 by Mohamed Elhachemi.
06-12-2012.

[spy4me]

abab cdcd efef gg .... nice shakespearean sonnet with a gothic tendancy, even great warriors need to rest but not to surrender, good work mohamed

[Mohamed]

abab cdcd efef gg .... nice shakespearean sonnet with a gothic tendancy, even great warriors need to rest but not to surrender, good work mohamed

you seem to be a great student of literature :19:

[spy4me]

you seem to be a great student of literature :19:

yes indeed, literature is my career as well as my passion
i appreciate your efforts here along with your works brother keep enlighting us
:mh31:

[وفية زاد]

so beautiful lines
I became a fan of ur poems, Sir
waiting for the next