your opinions for my paragraphe about amazon forest

[minina2601]

the amazon make one of great forest in our blue planet
ladies and gentelmen i have a massage for you, adress that this amazing forest it´s very inportant for our life because it´s protect and reserve our environment and make it very pure;so i have a dream that this resource be always naturel and not cantamined by very oposites like disert and tabacco smoking and carbon dioxide; i knew that you knew that all this oposites it is our own actions ,so we need to another ideas say that im a member intersted in protect environment and make it very nice and healthy
i hope that you are happy for listening me and thank you very much for coming and i hope that you inderstand my message.

[اسيل الورد]

hi it is very nice and i have knew your message

[زهرة الامل الجزائرية]

well it's good
but there is some mistakes u must correct it
but good jod
u r doing well

[زهرة الامل الجزائرية]

well it's good
but there is some mistakes u must correct it
but good jod
:19:u r doing well

[minina2601]

thank u all for your comontaries it's very inportant for me,but can u correct the mistakes please

[louiza94]

it's a good one
but there is some linguistic mistakes

[minina2601]

بارك الله فيكم thank u all

[لينة داعية الرحمان]

so good but u have some mistakes u should revise it

[عبد الله10]

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[minina2601]

you know the question of my X- test was to write about amazon forest i hope that i read your article befor
honestly it's beter then mine
nice work
keap it up brother
^^

[Bouchra mimi]

you 've done good job honestly

[lo1]

good.but ther some mistakes but is good
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

[dounia dalal]

its good but there is some mistakes :)

[DarknesFreak]

The amazon is one of greatest forests in our blue planet
ladies and gentlemen this amazing forest is very important to our life because it protects and Preserves our environment by giving us fresh clean air My dream is that we ensure that this resource will remain natural and not contaminated by the dark side of human evolution like tobacco smoking and carbon dioxide emissions ,
it's our duty to take action against this side effects
i hope that you enjoyed listening to me and understood my message, and thank you very much for coming..


i hope you don't mind i took the liberty of changing some things in your paragraph

[b2m5n]

The amazon is one of greatest forests in our blue planet
ladies and gentlemen this amazing forest is very important to our life because it protects and Preserves our environment by giving us fresh clean air My dream is that we ensure that this resource will remain natural and not contaminated by the dark side of human evolution like tobacco smoking and carbon dioxide emissions ,
it's our duty to take action against this side effects
i hope that you enjoyed listening to me and understood my message, and thank you very much for coming..


i hope you don't mind i took the liberty of changing some things in your paragraph




Very nice one But I spotted some mistakes in yours as well

The amazon is one of greatest forests= The amazon is one of the greatest forests

very important to our life=Very important to our lives


this side effects=These side effects


I hope my criticisms are welcome.

Take care.

[رنيم الجزائر]

it is really a wondreful paragraph but there are soooooooome little mistakes :
the amazon make one of great forest in our blue planet
ladies and gentelmen i have a massage for you, adresses that this amazing forest is very important for our life because it protects and preserves our environment and makes it very pure;so i have a dream that this resource will be always natural and not cantaminated by many opposites like desertification and tabacco smoking and carbon dioxide; i know that you know that all these opposites are our own actions ,so we need other ideas say that im a member interested in protecting environment and make it very beautiful(better) and healthy
i hope that you are happy for listening me and thank you very much for coming and i hope that you understand my message.

hope you accept my correction

peace

[fifi tery]

it is good but you have some mistakes you can replace the amazon make by the amazon is.................in addition we say inportant but we write important
and we write opposite with double p thank you

[minina2601]

thank u all