My poem about Gaza

[greenknight]

As the dark night comes to Gaza

The tragedies come with.

The little baby cries in darkness


Until he can't breathe


He cannot sleep a wink


Kuz no milk is left to drink.


There's no food, there's no bread


But there's pain in their stead


So, the poor mum can do nothing


But only her warm tears to shed


Weeping so much while asking:


What's up with this crazy world?


Why do others keep so silent?


Why cannot they say a word?


Are they so mute and deaf…


That my cries cannot be heard?


Is it my fate to be jailed…


In a cage just like a bird. ?


Who can say: "”No for the siege!"


Tell me who can really dare?


Who can give my kids some food?


Who can show them love and care?

[siverstriker]

u can change the font it's better coz no one understands
best wishes

[greenknight]

ok thanks for the remark .i'll do so sooner.

[greenknight]

As the dark night comes to Gaza
The tragedies come with.


The little baby cries in darkness


Until he can't breathe


He cannot sleep a wink


Kuz no milk is left to drink.


There's no food, there's no bread


But there's pain in their stead


So, the poor mum can do nothing


But only her warm tears to shed


Weeping so much while asking:


What's up with this crazy world?


Why do others keep so silent?


Why cannot they say a word?


Are they so mute and deaf…
That my cries cannot be heard?


Is it my fate to be jailed…


In a cage just like a bird. ?


Who can say: "”No for the siege!"


Tell me who can really dare?


Who can give my kids some food?


Who can show them love and care?

[زيدلون]

Dear Freind
What a splendid poem is! keep on,you're the future target poet .The way of writing it also shows your talent in this field,really you can be a famous poet if you keep on this breathe.In the end I should say if I may say it"the forum has brought its fruits"
Zaidaloune

[greenknight]

Dear brother Zaidaloune,
thank you very much for your very nice comment that will absolutely encourage me more and more to keep on writing
yours
greenknight

[cd_nail]

Peace be upon you brother
what is a beautiful and meaningful poetry

You deserve two points for the effort

Keep it on brother.

[khdawadj]

......you are the best of the best peac be up on you

[حنا090ن]

A wonderful poem
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[greenknight]

dear brothers and sisters
i'm so grateful for ur very sweet words .so thank you very much.
yours
greenknight

[ينابيع الصفاء]

What a touching poem?

I would be interested to know what inspired you to write this?

A 'fan

[greenknight]

dear brother !larb!as iam (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/member.php?u=143206) thank you for your comment.
actually, i had written this poem before the last offence against our brothes in Gaza.But as you know there is no doubt that the pictures of the siege having been shown on tv ( and still being) can not only inspire humans but they can even shake the stones.
in the end i wish i had been able to convey a message to the humanity.

[bila00b]

very nice poem ...touching

[منالM]

we must remember our brother in GHAZA in every thing in the life

[دموع الوفاء]

u must be proud cus u allowed ur word to putting on this silent world
i see ur pain break all the siege of the deaf
and what we saw and see is really wake up the deads.....
...we must look to the caze of gaza with deeply
thanks for ur words
salam

[hamza_se]

great poem!
so touching thanks