On my way

[براهيم جموعي]

hi every body how r u doing

i'm new in this section but old in this forum
i living in design section and now i in vacation

and this is 1st subject mine


on my way


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i'm walking on my way to forget what happened to my mind
i looking around me nothing... except the dark and the rain
the wind begins, no place to go nobody take my hand and show me right way
i feel cold in my skin in my blood . could be this last my day
i see my life front my eyes by surprise i hear voice calls me by my name
i open my eyes and realized i'm in just dream

wake up, wake up , the school is waiting

hhhhhhh

amazing story . what do you think ?

i hope accept me like friend

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

firstly I congratulate you for joining this forum
and then I would like to say welcome brother here is your family
I'll read it and comment later okaaay
keep it up

[hind 306]

hi my brother nice poem

u r welcom between us

[براهيم جموعي]

firstly I congratulate you for joining this forum
and then I would like to say welcome brother here is your family
I'll read it and comment later okaaay
keep it up

:othenx brouther
waiting u r comment :rolleyes:



hi my brother nice poem

u r welcom between us


thankx sister :o

this is first time write on forum usually i write in my dairy

but now i'll writttttttttttttttttttttte heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeere:19:

[Black_Poison]

Welcome brother to your second home
hhhh amazing dream.....or nightmare i guess hhh
keep it up brother
peace

[براهيم جموعي]

Welcome brother to your second home
hhhh amazing dream.....or nightmare i guess hhh
keep it up brother
peace


hhhh i have 1000000 dream like it

thankx a lot sister :19:

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Ibrahimkira
On my way

Welcome again
Reading the first lines I started to imagine the place and the events of a lonely man walking in the dark rainy night and no body on his side just trying to fix the right way …..
But when you indulged the event when some one was calling your name I thought some one was calling you to secure and provide a help but guess what!
It’s a call for school
And school in winter is not cool
Hahahahahahahah

Hey if you don’t mind there are some mistakes you have to correct them so as your poem will be great.

Ps: why you did not finish the story and delayed the conclusion a lil bit.
If you want to see an example I’ll lead you to one of my stories which was put in a humble poem but full of rhymes and imaginations it’s called (Thirsty for love)
Here’s the link

[براهيم جموعي]

Ibrahimkira


On my way

Welcome again

Reading the first lines I started to imagine the place and the events of a lonely man walking in the dark rainy night and no body on his side just trying to fix the right way …..

But when you indulged the event when some one was calling your name I thought some one was calling you to secure and provide a help but guess what!

It’s a call for school

And school in winter is not cool

Hahahahahahahah

Hey if you don’t mind there are some mistakes you have to correct them so as your poem will be great.

Ps: why you did not finish the story and delayed the conclusion a lil bit.

If you want to see an example I’ll lead you to one of my stories which was put in a humble poem but full of rhymes and imaginations it’s called (Thirsty for love)

Here’s the link




thanx for comment brother
i'll take this advice and Inchallah work by it:)

[Black_Poison]

hhhh i have 1000000 dream like it

thankx a lot sister :19:


No need to thank me Yakagami Light
?good brothers always deserve good encouragements right
just go ahead and keep writing

[براهيم جموعي]

No need to thank me Yakagami Light
?good brothers always deserve good encouragements right
just go ahead and keep writing

again thnkx a lot sister for support me
and i guess :D you watched death note
:mh31:the best anime ever

[Black_Poison]

Yeah i've seen deat note....amazing anime
i'm a fan of Naruto...and Naruto shippuden
i mean ..........it's obvious
hhhhh.....i like everything about ninjas

[براهيم جموعي]

Yeah i've seen deat note....amazing anime
i'm a fan of Naruto...and Naruto shippuden
i mean ..........it's obvious
hhhhh.....i like everything about ninjas


looks like , i'm not the only fan of anime Japanese
good we are two now
hhhhhhhhh

[soussodj]

hello brother,u're welcome between us
for the poem,really i congratulate u and i support u to keep writing
we are waiting your new amazing poem
GOOD LUCK brother

[براهيم جموعي]

hello brother,u're welcome between us
for the poem,really i congratulate u and i support u to keep writing
we are waiting your new amazing poem
GOOD LUCK brother


thnkx a lot sister for support me
:34::19:

[Black_Poison]

looks like , i'm not the only fan of anime Japanese
good we are two now
hhhhhhhhh



yeah....you know i thought that too
we are not two actually we are 4 fans
there's Yakumo and Hellsmoke
they are anime fans too

[ياسمين منصوري]

A wonderful story and we all live this snapshot of pathetic
Great thanks

[عبد الله10]

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