my first

[marouko1]

Salam
I want to show you what I wrote



I saw the sins kill our hearts
made us easily stay apart
give us the shame and lowness
give us hatred and loneliness
so try to let your guilts
and began a new start

Oh Allah forgive me
I return to you
So forgive me,and
accept me as a repentant*2

I did a lot in my life
I need to be far and safe
from all the wrong ways
from all the evils' eyes
I need a white heart
drow in me a pious part

Oh Allah forgive me
I return to you
So forgive me,and
accept me as a repentant*2

Allah you are the merciful
Allah you are the forgiver
so pardon the weak one
you're the only one that we have

Oh Allah forgive me
I return to you
So forgive me,and
accept me as a repentant*2

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

:mh92: Good morning sis :mh92:
Asa-lam 3alaykom dear ... frankly and honestly ... your poem is very beautiful ... a sinner comes back to Allah ... a sinner tries to wash away his sins with tears of regret ... and that's all who we are ... sinners ... some of us admits ... some of us denies ... some more goes further deep ... while some other stops and declines ... but the only winners are ... those who stop to think ... in tears they sink ... they fall on knees and beg for mercy ... finally realized life ain't worthy ... beautiful work sis ^^ ... keep it up that way ... all due respect ... your bro ... jimmy

:19: May Allah bless ya :19:

[Cash_money]

nice words

[fille algerie]

thnx a lot sis..i like it so much.. keep go on

[Hind_dz]

It's quite good

thnx 4 sharing

^^

[marouko1]

thank you all

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[YAHIA MAAMERI]

thanks for this poem