I'm So Alone

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

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[Hillin]

Hi
a Great impressive poem
I really felt sorry for that Kid
he should n't taste the pain of being 'alone "at this age
but rather he has to,like all the other children,have as much as fun,play with peers,out of harm's way, and learn more from his parent
Life was so harmful for him
seemed to be unfair
It was a hard experience for him
Howver,looking at the bright side I may say "he"is gonna be a good,gentle ,and strong man since he challenged life when he was child nd was given too much lessons about how to survive
just I would like to add sth which Has been mentioned above and I really you may say I don't agree with it anymore
it's
Hate
we shouldn't let such "negative" word invades our pure soul
thu we get enough harm from others
^^
By the way,the poem contains some spelling mistakes nd when I stopped by some words really they made me somehow confused such as Straglle_struggle,ingury_injury......... nd I said to myself"OMG how should it be written"nd I tried to write them on draft without looking to the PC ^^LOL
Thank you Friend for sharing
really I liked
CONGRATULATION
Keep it Up
BW

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank u very much sis ..... i kinda agree with you in that ahte issue but ... it's realy hard ... i tried and i'm still trying .... and about those spelling mistakes ... that was cause of the fast typing ...didn't realise ... by the way ... i didn't sleep all night ....lol ... thank you very much for stoping by and .... i apreciate your opinion

[امين التيارتي]

i feel ya man,
but u gotta be strong,
U're a good writer
good job
i appreciate u bro :)

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thanks for the support brother

[امين التيارتي]

Thanks for the support brother

U're wlcm , any time :D

[biba94]

beatiful words expres a wonderfu lmeanings
usuly i dislike this kind of sad music
but i liked yours
well done brother
keep on

[دينا11]

waaaaaw you r amizing it's a graet topic

[ROU7 EL-WARD]

oh my god

your words are really touching

u've make me cry

u got a fabullas talent

i wish u find a friend who understand u and complete the road with u

god bless u

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

:mh92:Hi family members:mh92:


I'm realy very very very thankful my brothers and sisters .... thanks for your support thanks for stoping by ... thanks for the friendly lovely words and expressions .... i'm realy happy just the fact that you felt how i once felt ... and you understood every word i put into this song ..... thanks

:19:thanks ... my allah keep ya'll safe:19:

[أميرة العرب]

hello my friend

well, actually for the 1st time of my life i don't know what to say


seriously it's the best song or poem i have ever read

caz i know it's from the bottom of ur heart

i have never been good in giving advices to orohens

my best friend lost her mother and i didn't know what to say

because i don't think that there are words or expressions that can make u cope with the bad facts

i'm really sorry for what u had to go through

u know life is tough

but i could feel that u are a great persone

so take care of ur mom and sisters

good luck bro

ur sister

peace

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank you very much sis .... yeah you're right ... life's tough .... but gotta know that ... if that did not kill you, it can only make you stronger ... and .... you know what all an orphan need is .... a sweet smile from a loyal sweet friend ... a shoulder to cry on .... cause all those words can do nothing and can not hide the facts as you said ... so ... thank you very much sister ... see ya round

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

hey homeboy I'm going to read it carefully then I'll reply ofcourse wow wow wow the Niggaz yeah Rap soldiers bro you attcked my impression man well done I'll be back I'll be back I'll be back mannnnnnnnnnnnnn yeahhhhh hhhhh

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank you very much homie .... i'll be around waiting for you ... peace out

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

and I liked the videos and the Dear Mama siging wow

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank you very very very much homie ..... that puches me to do more .... peace out

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

hey actually I have spo many records rapping some of my Raps but never published them hhhh

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

:mh92:Yo wassup OG:mh92:


I'm realy glad you loved my music though it was a simple home made music .... you said you never published your raps ... why? .. let me tell you something homie ... you see these rap songs of mine ... all of them are recorded in a phone!!! ... you belive this? ... lol ... but i never hisitated to publish them .... man release it no matter what ... i don't care if people loved or no .. actually i care lol .. hhh .. but most important is that i'll let evry body know i'm here .... the rap soldiers are tryna save rap from those wack rappers who give a bad reputation to what rap is realy about ... go and sheck out PAC if you wanna know what rap is realy about ... which i have no doubt that you do know dear brother ... thank you very very very much once more ...
by the way ... there's alot more coming

:19:peace out:19:

[Black_Poison]

Peace Brother
First i'd like to say welcome to your second home
where we are all a family
trying so hard to save each other and help each other to be happy
you'll never be alone here cuz you'll definitely find what you are looking for

in this home it doesn't matter where you came from
or what's your age .color or race
we are all brothers and sisters


and for the poem i really can't comment cuz it's beyond all expression

i could feel that pain , hurt and solitude
there's a lot of sorrow that made me cry
life is hard and unfair
but as long as you struggle and fight you'll make it at the end
keep your head high

welcome again rap soldier
i saw that you've met Mr Rap 4Life
he's a great guy and a great rapper
and i'm sure he won't mind to help you if you need help

[أميرة العرب]

Thank you very much sis .... yeah you're right ... life's tough .... but gotta know that ... if that did not kill you, it can only make you stronger ... and .... you know what all an orphan need is .... a sweet smile from a loyal sweet friend ... a shoulder to cry on .... cause all those words can do nothing and can not hide the facts as you said ... so ... thank you very much sister ... see ya round


never mind my friend

that's why there are friends

and never forget that u got me as a friend

i will always be here for you

so if u need anything...just name it

see ya

peace:19:

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

:mh92: Hi family :mh92:


What can i say .... every one have been so kind and sweet ... nice and gentle .... caring and loving .... just the same as i have been told ... u see my brother is a member of this family since a loooooong time .... and he guided me to get here ... just by saying: here you'll find real and pure friendships and brotherhood .... and that's what every one's looking for i guess ... so just when hearing this words i was like: sign me up!! sign me up! sign me up!! hhhhh and here i am ..... thank you my friends again and again and again for every thing ... may allah always keep ya'll safe

:19:Thank you for stopping by :19:

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

I swear the Real Rappers is the ones who suffer in their lives.

A rap is to turn a white paper to a black one writing rhymes that are suitable to the “beats and Bar”

You got everything you’re creative a brand new style keep it up homeboy.

That’s the kind of rapper I love to hear, read his lyrics

coz he has his freestyle his own ideas a unique style of writing

the chorus is so expressive.

You know what a Rap Soldja means you gotta be strong

Try to pass who passes you even friends coz there is a limit to everything

You need to look for a solution and you know.

I passed through a situation where I used to say “I’m lonely” I stayed like that

Until I removed that Idea of loneliness from my mind don’t surrender to this idea

Make friends everywhere you go every step should be looking for new friends

They are everywhere It’s hard to find real friends and good friend can’t be replaced

By anyone I know yeah actually I lost one friend before a Rap Soldier just like you

And me. Man so damn bad days I passed through coz you we used to be homeboyz I told

Him we’ll be homeboyz for whatever homeboyz till the bone. Then that happiness was gone

I cried, Screamed through windy nights telling that friend will be back but I got no ears!!!!

Did I stayed like that waiting hopeless just like they are everything in my life

I seem heartless but no people sometimes misunderstood me and got me mad and sad

I turned my attention to the my Imaginary world to the rhymes on my mind I kept it real

All I see is rhymes all I hear is Beats all I shoot is corruption

Rap is my real friend I never let it go can’t imagine man and you know what I mean.

I’ve no real friends outside but here I’ve friends.

I would like to present this to you

2pac “ Let’s be friends”

The Link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAsyFA_xcYQ

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

I swear the Real Rappers is the ones who suffer in their lives.

A rap is to turn a white paper to a black one writing rhymes that are suitable to the “beats and Bar”

You got everything you’re creative a brand new style keep it up homeboy.

That’s the kind of rapper I love to hear, read his lyrics

coz he has his freestyle his own ideas a unique style of writing

the chorus is so expressive.

You know what a Rap Soldja means you gotta be strong

Try to pass who passes you even friends coz there is a limit to everything

You need to look for a solution and you know.

I passed through a situation where I used to say “I’m lonely” I stayed like that

Until I removed that Idea of loneliness from my mind don’t surrender to this idea

Make friends everywhere you go every step should be looking for new friends

They are everywhere It’s hard to find real friends and good friend can’t be replaced

By anyone I know yeah actually I lost one friend before a Rap Soldier just like you

And me. Man so damn bad days I passed through coz you we used to be homeboyz I told

Him we’ll be homeboyz for whatever homeboyz till the bone. Then that happiness was gone

I cried, Screamed through windy nights telling that friend will be back but I got no ears!!!!

Did I stayed like that waiting hopeless just like they are everything in my life

I seem heartless but no people sometimes misunderstood me and got me mad and sad

I turned my attention to the my Imaginary world to the rhymes on my mind I kept it real

All I see is rhymes all I hear is Beats all I shoot is corruption

Rap is my real friend I never let it go can’t imagine man and you know what I mean.

I’ve no real friends outside but here I’ve friends.

I would like to present this to you

2pac “ Let’s be friends”

The Link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAsyFA_xcYQ




:mh92:Hi again my brother :mh92:

What can i say homie ... I'm really speechless ... you know what? it's true that i have been reading your reply but .... i really didn't know what to say .... because i imagined all the way down from the first word you wrote in this reply til the last one as a mirror ... i really think I'm just looking into a mirror and talking to my self .... wow...man just tell me you're the other me ... and I'll come right now to pick you up and join your soul into mine ... hhhh ... I'm sorry for your friend ... i feel ya ... trust me i feel ya ... you see every time i have a discussion with a rapper i notice one thing .. and ask one question ... why's most rappers share the same type of life ... pain .. suffer ... dark thoughts .. cruelty ... and don't worry bro ... i don't find you a heartless person at all ... you know and i know that such softness feelings are off of our hearts homie ... that's what real rappers share ... that what real rap is about ... man .. I'm so happy to get to know such a great person ... and what's more important .. a person who can understand me ... brother ... keep up ... I'm here for u G .. got ya back

:19: peace out :19:

[hiba-2012-]

it's a graet topic thanks:mh92:my best brother.

[Mst-inf]

Bro i can't tell you how much i looooooove and touch by what u wrote amazing bro
This life is biger than you me he she we ................etc
and as i see u describe ur feeling by the best way eve......
i know hard to resist sometimes bcs in the end we r human and we have weackness moments......
what i can say my Little bro u r not alone..............
i see all memebers here loves and cares abt u............
and be sure those hard momentsthat what make us Real men and Real women.............
you will have a great happy life i'm suuuure of that

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

it's a graet topic thanks:mh92:my best brother.



wow ... hi there angel face ... i'm super happy that you passed by .. thnx ... much love .. ^^ .. JIMMY

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Bro i can't tell you how much i looooooove and touch by what u wrote amazing bro
This life is biger than you me he she we ................etc
and as i see u describe ur feeling by the best way eve......
i know hard to resist sometimes bcs in the end we r human and we have weackness moments......
what i can say my Little bro u r not alone..............
i see all memebers here loves and cares abt u............
and be sure those hard momentsthat what make us Real men and Real women.............
you will have a great happy life i'm suuuure of that

Hi ... i guess you're so right bro ... ^^ ... thnx

[baby angel]

hi again jemmy so they delted my page dame for them but let's mak this our talking page

[baby angel]

hhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i wher re you broooooooooooooooooo

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

H i again ... I'm so glad you find my posts ........ sure we can make this a talking page

[baby angel]

thanks but the song are you the one who sing it

[baby angel]

send me a messeg plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

yeah ... i'm the one who sing it ... you liked it or no
?

[amine pop 4 life]

All I can say that you're extremely smart and know how to write what are u really really feel inside and that's enough for me because the real artist can describe his emotions and feelings and turns them to words
It will be a great mistake if you left that dream

don't give up keep trying till you get what you want and more than that what you really deserve'

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

All I can say that you're extremely smart and know how to write what are u really really feel inside and that's enough for me because the real artist can describe his emotions and feelings and turns them to words
It will be a great mistake if you left that dream

don't give up keep trying till you get what you want and more than that what you really deserve'



Thank you very much bro .. i'm glad you liked it .. hope to catch up with ya in your next topics ^^ .. peace

[baby angel]

are you kiding your have a greate voice

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

Thank you very very very much

[amel nina]

Wow wow wow I'm just ........................... sorry I couldn't find the right words to describe what I feel now, it 's an honor to have such a brilliant talent here, I want to congratulate you from the bottom of my heart, you got all the qualities that a good Rap Singer should have, your accent is so great that I thought you're not an algerian but rather an american native speaker, the idea of the poem is so meaningful as it talks about the suffering of a little boy which was left out in this tough life, believe me you should be in the top with all those successful rappers, don't you ever give up on this, and as a family here, we'll be by your side encouraging and supporting you
Honestly, you impressed more than ever
:):):):):):)


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[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

:mh92: HI DEAR NINA ^^ :mh92:
Hi sis .. how r ya? wish ya fine ^^ .. what i also can say ...!! .. how can i thank and reply ... your words in my heart were like the sun in the sky ... without that sun the bright will die ... you brought up hope in a cruel heart ... you glue a wall that already fell apart ... you did draw me a new start ... dear nina i thank you deep deep from my heart
your bro ^^ jimmy

:) Thanks :)

[amir kh]

AYO ....hey bro wassup?? where have you gone?? ... great song ... i'm so alone ..... i always listen to it ... i even memorized it ..ay call me ... ineed to talk to you about some troubels we gotta make hhhhhhhhhhhh ... u know ............ thug life baby

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

OK man ...just don't drop any bastard be before i get to the murder scene ..... thug life baby

[مسافرة الى الله]

very sad................

[Maria Rap 4 Ever]

good job man

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

good job man

thnx who ever u really are dear
^^

[amine pop 4 life]

I just can't stop saying that you're so so great in your poems so keep like that