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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : the self esteem my new poem


ابتساام
2012-07-24, 21:11
The self esteem is crown on the head, you should know
Never put in your mind that you can bow
To human except the Creator who make you grow
You should gather your strength and show
Show it to the people, then they'll follow, yes you
Before the train time go
Before the wind blow
And in the delusions you'll drown
A good picture express you draw
The life is not a lie
It is one life then comes a day when you die
You will say to the world goodbye
Is not the good time to cry
Seize your opportunity to see the sky
The flocks of birds when they fly
And enjoy with the sunset and the sunrise

There is who'll forget your name
Because what's meaning of fame
Without a noble and heroic aim
We see the difference and the same
There are solutions and jams
Don't defraud people and blame
But process by the same way

I wanna go out from this ash
Or I will, I will crush
I'll try to find my way
But how can I
And with which way

ابتساام
2012-07-24, 21:20
هادي الخاطرة عندها عام كامل وهي مكتوبة وموضوعة في ملف افكار مشتتة يعني هي خواطر في خاطرة وعنوانها احترام الذات

amel nina
2012-07-24, 21:28
the words are well chosen, the topic is so interesting, i liked everything in the poem


waiting 4 the next ones

ابتساام
2012-07-24, 22:13
thank you very much
yes inshallah i have many poems to you and friends

BouDi9
2012-08-02, 07:15
absolutely Superb words Well organized Gathered together in such way that rimes
anyway is it yours ?

ابتساام
2012-08-03, 15:03
yes of course it's mine thank you very much boudi9

Karim_Rap_4_life
2012-08-05, 00:57
as usual I see you one of the best that Djelfa has ever had

ابتساام
2012-08-05, 12:53
as usual I see you one of the best that Djelfa has ever had

thank youuuuuuuuuuuu very much it's honor