Dark

[sarouna22]

There's a cold dark corner
in the back of my room,
it speaks to me
and says I'm coming for you.

As I lie on my bed
in the fetal position,
my eyes are closed
hoping and wishing.

Maybe that one day
my dreams will come true,
that I don't have to be here
so down and blue.

The corner keeps talking
about how I'm going to die,
all I can do
is lie there and cry.

As the corner gets closer
and takes me in,
my soul starts to burn
as so does my skin.

My bones shall lie there
turning to dust,
my bed surrounding
nothing but rust.

[nazz]

الله ما بلغنا رمضان

[.kiki]

Ok! that's what I call special... that was beautiful, really

nice one, sis, keep it up !


peace

[Hind_dz]

it's so sad but beautiful at the same time

u have a real gift in writing.. really! i'm moved by ur poem

keep on the good work

My Regards 2 U

[spy4me]

hi sarouna
creative as always
the style you adopted helps transferring the image so clearly and beautifully
nice poem keep writing well
dont give up and try to beat the beast
peace

[amouna23]

WWOwwwwwwww a goood one........ that was beautiful, really
and i hope you keep writing well like that
^^^^^^^^^

[Hillin]

Uhhh I don't know that you've phobia from dark
don't worry We are all here to lighten your room
^^
congrats Sarouna
awsome
really I liked your style of writting
In Chaa Allah one day your dreams come true
so
just GO AHEAD
Best of Luck

[أميرة العرب]

saléééééém

congratulation sis

i like ur poem

i wish it was longer

but it's nice anyway

kepp going

peace