My moon

[بوقرة الزعيم]

the moon
there is two moons ,the first it in the space and the second she is reading this poem ,today I talk about her. she is " My Baby "
if you know she is better than the moon
if you know she is angle life between as
if you know she use the best words in the best place
if you know she have a big heart feels with the others
if you know she helps any one he asking for here the helps
if you know she light the paths of others
if you know the really moon want to be like her
if you know I am lucky because I am Her boyfriend
finally I know this words it little for her because if you want to talk about her you need a sea of words and long years
your lover
H.B.L

[«●صيـْـدَلـيَّـةُ¤الـمُـسْتَــقبـلْ●»]

WaaAaw ! :mh92:
really it's a good work
it has a great meaning
all my wishes to you

[Hillin]

Hi over there
Nice to read such expressive parag!!!!!poem!!!!or free poem
that's it

she is lucky to have a friend who care about her and wrote a special poem for her
guess "Ur Moon'll read and liked it
thx for sharing
and
Good Luck

[بوقرة الزعيم]

thank for you all
this is one of others poems of me
if you want to see or read it call me in my ********
you find it in my information

[eva de paradis]

n!ce words dude,wish the best of luck with ur girlfrnd

[BouDi9]

yeah yeah yeah as always WHATEVER!

[amel nina]

to be honest with you, I didn't like it at all, it deals with boy/girlfriends stuff which are not acceptable in our traditions as muslims
plus, there are lots of mistakes that you should work on them


I expected to see a poem like that of "failure wonderful (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=1038632)", it truly inspired me


but what I got here is something disappointing

hope to see good poems from you in the future, cuz I believe you can do better than this one :19::19::19::19:
+++++++++++++++

my regards

:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

[Hind_dz]

Well... good 2 know that there R people like this

[احسان2]

i hpoe that she s gonna b ur wife nchlh