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2012-07-11, 08:39
:mh92:hi,
iam your sister:o : my name is aridj:)
so;today i write my first topic here and i want an encouragment from you "all my friends";)
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GooOo!
Sometimes life is so cruel..but!,Sometimes the opposite and the human must be strong in all stages.
I known,i can and i'm able to occupy the world by my imagination and my ideas .
So;everyone can imagine and try to get the best thing in this life .
always smail and say:I'M OKEY,THANKE YOU and i promise you will be fine !!.
Don't care for people and don't hear the opinions about you because you known well who are you?
Be free,enjoy,play with others,communicate,be serious in times seriously,do what you want,when you want and where you want ..
Don't try to please people to stay with you because who want to stay with you,he is really worth your interest.
So; life is like a short game you choose and you will be a winner or loser..!!??
all my wishes for you..
i hope to like my topic
Aridj New Girl
oh! i forget to tell you it's by my blue pen

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2012-07-11, 09:11
i think you don't like it
okeeeeeeeeeeeeey perhaps it's very bad
thake you all !!!!!

Hillin
2012-07-11, 11:15
Welcome friend
and thank you for sharing us your first topic
I liked it coz I liked most your spontaneity
By the way dear
I would like to draw ur attention only to one thing,ur topic is full of grammatical mistakes so it would be better to avoid them in ur next topic inorder to avoid misunderstanding
WE'RE ALL LEARNERS HERE
WE'RE HERE TO HELP EACH OTHER
My Best Wishes

spy4me
2012-07-11, 18:24
hi aridj
well, i like what your blue pen wrote and i wish it will be happy pen and not blue
thank you for the advice and you may want to listen to what hillin said about mistakes, but it's ok you'll improve over time
welcome here and i hope you enlighten us with more topics
salam

bella97
2012-07-11, 18:33
Hii Aridj :D
I Really Like your Topic
Carry On :)
With all my love :)

Black_Poison
2012-07-11, 19:10
Hi there sister
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelcome
i'm an old and new friend if you remember me
well i like your topic
i like the idea it's gret
there are some mistakes but they can be fixed
just keep going and don't give up
i'm here to support you