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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The last letter of the poet...lady of my heart


spy4me
2012-07-01, 18:32
O lady of my heart, where you used to dwell

Should I keep suffering or should I tell

Things that gone and things that still trigger

Red fires, in me, how do I get weaker

Still wondering, even I know what love did

To poets, that darkness, through bad times indeed

Just why life could never do so

For me, to reveal secrets and to make me know

That nothing lasts forever, no people stay together

That thoughts of sunny days, so bad

That thoughts of dark nights, so sad

Tears on the cheeks , a very long stream

That life is never as good as it may seem

So hard to forget, so hard to let go

Someone who gave you so much to remember, so much to know

O lady, if you set me free you are wise

But freedom in prison, is death in disguise

What wisdom is that, when one word you say

Ending all that in a wink, and sending it away

What made your heart like rocks, so hard

Goodbye, goodbye, that word, is so hard

My poor heart, what pain you may bear

For life’s not just, for life’s unfair



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"a poet doesn't need always a motive to write while moments of joy, depression, or maybe just imagination might inspire his soul so that he sets his pen free and unleaches the words in everywhere to reach hungry hearts that seek for a she.lter and look for a cradle of hope even thru simple words" spy4me

sarouna22
2012-07-01, 22:35
poetry at the top of magnificence

you are always provide amzing spy

peace

spy4me
2012-07-01, 23:41
poetry at the top of magnificence

you are always provide amzing spy

peace





oh hey sarouna it's been a while heh? i hope you're fine
thanks for reading
waiting for your stunning topics
salem

أميرة العرب
2012-08-04, 19:31
hello my friend

well,as ussual u entertain us and take us to an other world

the words are very nice

the theme is from our life

and i liked the rythem too

so keep going
our wise friend





ur sis

spy4me
2012-08-04, 22:43
hello my friend

well,as ussual u entertain us and take us to an other world

the words are very nice

the theme is from our life

and i liked the rythem too

so keep going
our wise friend





ur sis

hi princess, happy you showed up again
and happy you like the poem too
thank you for reading
^^

احسان2
2012-08-04, 23:44
oh lady of his heart what u ve done to him
so nice so cool always

spy4me
2012-08-05, 00:05
oh lady of his heart what u ve done to him

so nice so cool always


see ihsane !.. lool
happy you read it
thank you , waiting for your writings

Hillin
2012-08-09, 15:22
Nice one
very expressive
thu it's difficult to find the exact and suitable words to express our feelings sometimes but i think you succeeded nd u were very selective"poet"l
I liked the way you 've chosen to describe "contradiction such as when you said:l
O lady, if you set me free you are wise

But freedom in prison, is death in disguise

I liked the Story thu as I c it was sad somehow it told us about how love is sometimes unfair & tasteless
nd how the dream falls apart as soon as the lovers can't share the same feelings
congratulation,really it's wonderful
Thank u friend for sharing
Keep in touch

spy4me
2012-08-09, 18:28
Nice one
very expressive
thu it's difficult to find the exact and suitable words to express our feelings sometimes but i think you succeeded nd u were very selective"poet"l
I liked the way you 've chosen to describe "contradiction such as when you said:l
O lady, if you set me free you are wise

But freedom in prison, is death in disguise

I liked the Story thu as I c it was sad somehow it told us about how love is sometimes unfair & tasteless
nd how the dream falls apart as soon as the lovers can't share the same feelings
congratulation,really it's wonderful
Thank u friend for sharing
Keep in touch



hi hilin, i want to say thank you for your nice words
such poems may express the poet himself or a story that inspires him
thank you again for reading
^^

أميرة العرب
2012-08-10, 22:34
never mind..any time

ur sis

spy4me
2012-08-12, 23:28
never mind..any time

ur sis
thanks sis