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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : For all the broken wings


.kiki
2012-06-26, 12:50
Hello memebers! wish you all are doing well

those are some lines I wrote last year, i kept them in a word document and it's till now that I had the guts to share them with you guys

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...For all the broken wings

...That could never fly

...For all the desperate souls

...That can’t wait to die

.Life should be this way

!Or else we would never enjoy it

.There should be a black day

So we recognize what’s hope to live the white and see it.

.Never cry upon past stories

!The virus of our minds is memories

...Let your spirit dance with winds of storms

...And your heart beats higher than thunder

:And look down to the world and say

I’m a part of you... I’ll die one day

in you... But I’ll never give up to you...




be honest with me in your replies, huh! ^^ thnx for reading

كنوز المعرفة
2012-06-26, 13:24
omg !!! so amazing
girll you have the words
really wish you all the best
carry on
you are not like the rest
you are the best

.kiki
2012-06-26, 13:48
woOow ! emmm... thank you dear, i'm not worth all this
definitely not
thank you very much though. Honored that you like them

I appreciate it

the fly boy
2012-06-27, 12:34
Nice words sis Kiki
this is life
tht's why we should be like a strangers
coz we r only visitors in this life

.kiki
2012-06-27, 19:02
yes brother, well said

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thank you for passing by

.kiki
2012-07-04, 13:21
broken wings

desparate souls

weak beating hearts

and life still goes on

Wallace
2012-07-07, 21:35
Great! Thank you


Wallace

.kiki
2012-07-08, 10:34
you're welcome! thank YOU

Hillin
2012-07-08, 11:46
Nice words
coming from a talent friend
Thank you kiki for sharing us such meaningful lines
hope to read more and more
so
GO ahead
Best of Wishes

.kiki
2012-07-08, 12:17
very pleased to read your cute reply, friend

i'll try too bring you guys my best

thank you all, take care !

Black Blossom
2012-07-08, 15:12
what a cheerful words
All thanks that u shared it
Keep your pen wet

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.kiki
2012-07-08, 19:28
ah you're welcome, you're welcome for your 'thank you' and you're welcome here with us, I see you're brand new hh
very honored that your first participation was this one, here in my page, thank you very much, I appreciate it

but dear, why would you put 'hell' as where youlive? dear that's not so nice you know, try to change it ok? ^^ best wishes

peace

that's me
2012-07-09, 22:54
:19:how beautiful ! but it will be even more beautiful if we achieve these values and deal with our problems in such a wise way

.kiki
2012-07-15, 22:23
thank you sis! glad you seem to understand what I pointed to through these lines

so ^^ good luck in making it more beautiful in your deary

peace

BouDi9
2012-08-02, 07:22
simply enjoyable Poem nice words , keep on hun

Hind_dz
2012-08-02, 20:35
!I simply love it

.kiki
2012-08-02, 22:51
simply enjoyable Poem nice words , keep on sister

thnx bro, glad you enjoyed it

.kiki
2012-08-02, 22:55
!I simply love it

and I simply appreciate it ^^ !!