mY AdVice tO yoU

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

الــــســــلامــــ عـــــــلــــيـــكـــمـــ


This's my fourth poem ... I hope you a good

time with these modest words





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Put your last word and say bye

Don't look for the person that you passed by

Take it easy and don’t say why ?



This’s life which makes people crazy

It touches everyone even the baby

Is it sometimes nice ? …. Maybe ...


When you failed in something don’t be desperate

You just tried … and that’s great !!

Say always “ I love “ and forget “ I hate “


Work hard to draw your way

From bad people … stay away

That’s life say to it “ hey “


Be glad to fight the difficulties

:) Is that possible ? yes it is



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[kristinedz]

woooow
nice words bro
i like it
keep going

[نعمة القدوس]

WOOooooowwW !

I love it. Even more than any of the last poems of yours.

This is not modest by the way, it's perfect >> and i love perfection

Well, I'm seeing you growing up in every word you say >> in fact you write LOL ^^

I'm talking like your mom hhhhhh


i wanted to choose one part i like in the poem

and i just couldn't !

it's all my favorite.

Very wise expressions, carefully chosen and so touching : )


Congratulations, your English level is higher. That's why I'm so proud of you.


is it enough ? yes it is >> Zé3ma t3anedt 3lik hhh

[« شَيمآءْ »]

This is The best Poem i Had read

East and west This Poem Is the Best

LoL

We'Re waiting The others

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woooow
nice words bro
i like it
keep going

Thanks sis

I'm happy cuZ yOu love it

:)
:)
:)
:)
:mh31:

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

WOOooooowwW !

Really crasy hhhh

I love it. Even more than any of the last poems of yours.

Hummmm .... That means the others were bad and you told me they ARE amazing !!!! hhhhhh

This is not modest by the way, it's perfect >> and i love perfection

I know you hhhhh

Well, I'm seeing you growing up in every word you say >> in fact you write LOL ^^
Is that true or just to make me happy ?

I'm talking like your mom hhhhhh

Yeah .... I noticed that :1:

i wanted to choose one part i like in the poem

Just one !!!!

and i just couldn't !

That's better :D

it's all my favorite.

Liar :1: :1: hhhhh

Very wise expressions, carefully chosen and so touching : )

Hmd

Congratulations, your English level is higher. That's why I'm so proud of you.

HHH really liar :1::1::1:

is it enough ? yes it is >> Zé3ma t3anedt 3lik hhh

:19: :19: :19: :19: :19: :19:





:rolleyes: I really enjoy reading your comments but I find difficulty to replay

What I can say is : thank you for these big words

Sorry if I did mistakes im my reply

:):):):):):):)

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This is The best Poem i Had read

East and west This Poem Is the Best

LoL

We'Re waiting The others



East and west This COMMENT Is the Best

Merci my sister ... you won't wait to much :)

[saya2011]

it's a wonderfull expression about our life

i think for some words to yours but don't be angry from me:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

Be glad to fight the difficulties
and make them facilities
Is that possible ? yes it is


i wait your next poem

continue like that

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it's a wonderfull expression about our life

i think for some words to yours but don't be angry from me:rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:

Be glad to fight the difficulties
and make them facilities
Is that possible ? yes it is


i wait your next poem

continue like that

Really nice words ... I'll add them in my personal notebook

thank you didter ... :19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19::19:

[amoula07]

realy i didn't find the word
When I read this Piece of poem, I felt as I'm reading A poem of a very know poet


:19::19::19:

[amoula07]

we are waiting for next poems
;););)

[مبْدِعَـﮧْ حَتَّى فِي ـأَخْطَآْئِي]

Niiice Edvice Brooo !!

So !!

C'esT ToooP

!!


ـ‘،

J'ai perdus les mots ..

Donc ... Excuse me Broo !!

I touched in your words !!

Some hope !!

I really Like iT ...

Continue like that et tu vas devenir

A Great poète ^^

[~ حِـكــآيةُ حُ‘ـلمٍ ♫]

peace and mercy upon you

i didn't know that you write perfect english poems like this !

i love it , cuz i really needed a similar advice in those days

i like this part very much ^^


Put your last word and say bye

Don't look for the person that you passed by

Take it easy and don’t say why ?

nice work happy boy =)

take care of yourself ;)

[rola.29]

Hi Saïd
as usual , everything you write is wonderful .. i really enjoyed reading what you wrote

and i loved your sign (signature) it's so meaningful
YoUr LifE iS a StOrY

؛ SoOo ؛

EnjY reading iT

hhh, keep writing bro .. my best wishes for you to succed

[Black_Poison]

amazing poem
and great advice
thanks girl
waiting for more of you sweet poems

[قمر البتول]

like always your poeams are wonderful

[amouna23]

WOWW
a wonderful poem and agreat advice
I LIKE IT
keep going

[roufaida19]

Niiice Edvice Brooo !!

So !!

C'esT ToooP

[الذِكرَى البَيضآء~]

peace upon you
i know i'm late sorry
it's a greay poem ,i didn't know you are a poet
i realy like it
thankx go on dont stop writting
thankx again brother

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realy i didn't find the word
When I read this Piece of poem, I felt as I'm reading A poem of a very know poet


:19::19::19:

we are waiting for next poems
;););)


God bless you Amel

Thank you for your comments

:) :) :)

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Niiice Edvice Brooo !!

So !!

C'esT ToooP

!!


ـ‘،

J'ai perdus les mots ..

Donc ... Excuse me Broo !!

I touched in your words !!

Some hope !!

I really Like iT ...

Continue like that et tu vas devenir

A Great poète ^^








In shaa Allah

Thank you sister ... I'm waiting your poem :)

Nice comment

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