In the Wind

[Bluebird]

The road was long
There was no sign that it has an end.
It was veilled with fog
Dreams flew from the head.
Little birds, flowers and a frog
Were there near the lake side.
Few words, laughs and a song
Came from a heart died.
Her face disappeared like smog
Went into the long road.
Searching for him and the dog
That she lost one day in the wind.

2002

[Maria Rap 4 Ever]

it was really good
i liked it

[Bluebird]

thanks for your comment.

[Asolvip]

Nice work !

[Bluebird]

nice words from your side Asolvip ! Thanks.

[Karim-Rap-4-Life]

Hello ...I like what you wrote bro it's nice but what the number 2002 means?

[Bluebird]

...its date of birth.

[Katy Pretty girl]

i loved the story
so interesting
keep it up brother

[Bluebird]

...just if you go on critisizing my words.

[Bluebird]

I'm learning from you.

[Bluebird]

waiting for new poems.

[Bluebird]

back again

[Nani4002]

Great words, very interesting

[Bluebird]

thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnks