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wiwii_rock · 2013-03-23, 14:38

Can't Count the Tears

I've been awake for days- I can't sleep

The thought of losing you; Cuts me deep

My heart is crying out for you

Will I have- to come home to?

I need you here.

Right now I'm living in my darkest fear,

My head hurts- I can't stop the ringing in my ear.

It's feels like I'm crying blood instead of tears,

What the hell is happening to me- after all these years?

رنيم الجزائر · 2013-04-12, 20:29

well rhymed

thanks a lot it is wonnnnnnderful

peace

لبيبة المسلمة · 2013-05-01, 15:20

really nice

keep it up

thanks

Katy Pretty girl · 2013-07-09, 21:10

great job
i liked the words
they sound deep
u did a wonderfull job
keep it up
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by the way i hope u vote in the competion

أسير الطموح · 2013-07-10, 02:22

Well done Just go Ahead & keep it up

Ramadhan Moubarak

Katy Pretty girl · 2013-07-10, 15:19

u should write more in the section of "members writing
keep it up

fille algerie · 2013-07-10, 17:44

A wonderful poem ... thanks a lot sis
My regards

♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥ · 2013-07-10, 18:30

Short but well written .. Love it
Keep up the good work ;

white heart 12 · 2013-07-11, 13:00

Thanks.It was amazing

kacimo.samy · 2013-07-11, 14:39

wonderful words

keep it up

ramadhan mobarak

bouchra bou · 2013-07-12, 22:22

wonderful poem with deep meaning
keep it up u r doing great job

Ai Usagi · 2013-07-15, 21:10

i can't understand this spart " will i have to come home too ?!! ur heart is full of pain and sorrow because you're gonna return to home , to be honest i can't understand that verse

وشَـ،ـآحْ الـصـِـبـآا · 2013-07-18, 13:49

what a beautiful words ..
may i ask about the source or they are your own ..

thanks for sharing ..

هيسواف اسلام · 2013-09-20, 16:55

nice poem ...... welll done

FAN2013 · 2013-09-26, 20:57

really great poem