Advice in writing expression

ali gourgache · 2009-07-12, 12:59

The word thing and its compound like anything something..etc should be avoided much as possible;because they make the overal aspects of the composition vague.I'll give you an example:
the thing was that i didn't understand anything of all the things she was trying to tell me.I had to think of something to face the situation but i couldn't find anything to make her understand.So;i just smiled without a thing.These red words make you imagine others to be instead them.So guess them to make the short text meaningful and clear.Good Luck

matrix_hamdi · 2009-07-12, 14:35

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The word thing and its compound like anything something..etc should be avoided much as possible;because they make the overal aspects of the composition vague.I'll give you an example:
the thing was that i didn't understand anything of all the things she was trying to tell me.I had to think of something to face the situation but i couldn't find anything to make her understand.So;i just smiled without a thing.These red words make you imagine others to be instead them.So guess them to make the short text meaningful and clear.Good Luck

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ali gourgache · 2009-07-12, 18:12

Thanks i'm sorry for my erratum or printing error.sorry again and thank you for your comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!G.L

matrix_hamdi · 2009-07-12, 21:07

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Thanks i'm sorry for my erratum or printing error.sorry again and thank you for your comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!G.L

Hello, again
Sorry for what? This often happens
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sabiha18 · 2009-07-23, 21:16

good point indeed
thanx

ali gourgache · 2009-07-24, 10:55

You are welcome Sabiha,just make a diffrence
The problem was that i didn't understand the meaning of all the story she was trying to tell me.I

ali gourgache · 2009-07-24, 11:04

the problem was that i didn't understand the meaning of all the story she was trying to tell me.I had to think of the solution to face the situation but I couldn't find a way to make her understand.So,Ijust smiled without saying a word.i I think that the idea is clear to you just compare between the first and the second paragraph.thanks again Sabiha.