A Thin thread .... ( A poem by me )

[الضب الزين]

A Thin thread

How bitter is Death
When It catchs one's breath
Waterfall of tears falling
Whithout stopping
What is waiting us ?
Our fate we have to discuss
Heaven or Hell ?
If we dare to tell
Death hasn't a date
Just be ready to face your fate
White deed
He will hell exceed
Black deed
He will for being in heaven plead
Just remember that death's a thin thread

Hope u like it ..

[نَازِكْ]

good i like it so much cus it's realty
it's all ourselves chosen hell or heaven it's up to us to chose the path
and it's true death is so close it's like you said a thin thread you don't know when it would drag you to your grave
keep it up

[DôRsàfe]

Good Job i like this ....

[imen red flower]

i like i, it's goodt

[للعلا طالبة]

Oh, it is dark but somehow encouraging to do good things ^^' I like it.

[hhh99]

rhyme and rhythm of a rap song
do you by any chance happen to be a rapper ?

[fâscînat]

good job ....congratulation

[imen red flower]

you're talenty,keep writing