i'm sorry !

روح قسنطينة · 2015-01-22, 10:40

last summer i wrote a poem 2 my best of friends , n i wanna share with u 2 tell me about ur opinions
K and M
I know that i hurt you
And i broke your heart too
My face is sad and blue
So gloomy and i just wanna spew
Oh! i was like dirty jew
Rude like that i lived in slew
Run away is what i wanna do
Yesterday, is the day when i knew
Knew that i was as bad as my shoe
Man tell me what shall a little girl can do

نارينا · 2015-01-22, 19:08

the rhyme of the verses seems typical

Nice job

.....keep on writing ....
though girls are the subject theme of any vital issue ......

whoseen · 2015-01-24, 20:29

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last summer i wrote a poem 2 my best of friends , n i wanna share with u 2 tell me about ur opinions
K and M
I know that i hurt you
And i broke your heart too
My face is sad and blue
So gloomy and i just wanna spew
Oh! i was like dirty jew
Rude like that i lived in slew
Run away is what i wanna do
Yesterday, is the day when i knew
Knew that i was as bad as my shoe
Man tell me what shall a little girl can do

nice poem and nice name soul of constantine keep practising and reading poems