وضعيتي في الإنجليزية bem 2015

[honey swifter]

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تحصّلت على العلامة الكاملة في ماللغة الإنجليزية
وهذه فقرتي
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The biodiversity plays a huge and basic role in our life, but recently it faces a lot of problems, the most dangerous one is : the extinction of some animals . this problem may well threaten the ecological balance then put the life of human beings in danger.
Natural catastrophe and changment of climate can be the causes of disappearance of animals, but the principle one is man and his activities. Man has hunted the animals and killed them for their meat, skin, ivory ... ect . He has also destroyed their habitats with pollution , cutting down the trees, ...
So ,the government must take many measures to save the fauna . First, the must create laws which invent fishing and hunting animals out of season , and punish all the illegal hunters . Second; the have to stop polluting the environment ( we mustn't throw rubbish anywhere ) , save the forests ,sh elter the rare spices and treat them. Finally; we should sensitize citizens about the important of the animals and convince them to don't harm them

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