Please help me to introduce my self

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من فضلكم أريد المساعدة حول التعريف بالنفس (Introduce yourself), تصحيح الأخطاء أو اضافة بعض المعلومات

I Mohammed Riad, I'm 21 years old, I belong from Tlemcen. Currently I'm a civil engineer student at Abou-Bekr Belakaid technology faculty, I'm in master one level, structure specialty. .In my free time i like to practice soprt, especialy jogging in the forest.
I always want to grow up my knowledge and develop my self from the mistakes that I do.
My short term goal is to finish my studies and get a job in a good company and contribute to the development of my country.
I think it all about me.

Thanks for your help

Hi Mohamed ...i tried to correct your mistakes

I’m Mohamed Riad.I’m 21 years old.I’m from Algeria.I live in Telemcen. Currently I study civil engineering at Abou-Bekr Belakaid technology faculty, i’m first year master (structure speciality). In my spare time i like practicing sport beside wandering in the forest. I awlays want to inrease my knowledge and develope my self by learning from my mistakes. My short term goal is to finich my study and get a job……………