my first poem in english

هيسواف اسلام · 2013-12-21, 16:25

Light in the darkness

Through the whispering of the wind and the darkness of the night

There were a bleak someone laying on his right

Feeling sadness,loneliness looking for a glimpse of light

Just staring to the wide moon ,waiting for the might

Yes the might that will hold his hand from diving in the sleight

No parent ,no friend ,no wife asking him about his tight

There is nothing in this world is going to change ,my life will be the same

Day after day ,year follows year why even in my dreams no one say my name

I envy the birds when I see them flying in the sky , to whom should I blaime?

My heart is going to to sink into my tears , yes this is the claim

Ohhh someone whispered in my ear , I got confused either it is a dream or just a game

Stand up , stand up on your foot again

There is nothing to mourn about it man

Because the God know well what is the good for you

Remember that there are many people are more miserable than you

However, they are keeping smiling always saying thank you

To lost something or a lot is not the end of the world

Who gives and deprives is just one Lord

Never ever think to surrender don’t give up and start searching for happiness

Just with a glaim of hopeful , be sure the life will show you its goodness.

Say Amen

this is really my first poem in english and i have wrote it for any guy esp algerian guy have such feeling and have no one to speak to him or shair with him or her anything because really i know this feeling i hope you will feel with them . and i am waiting from you any comment any critisim . you are welcome