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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة oumadoumawayouta
salem aleikoum
i just want to correct some mistakes
" took my diary book as an attempt to force my eyes to be closed as soon as I read two lines or just one page, but it was useless ;"
wordy
i took my diary not diary book to force myself to sleep
I found myself turning the pages nd keep reading the lines
i found myself turning the pages and kept the ...
"Summer’s sun differs from spring’s one as well as fall’s rains differ from winter’s one"
the sun in summer is ... or summer sun
rain in autumn differs from...
"a little cold drop of waters softly hit our faces and push us to show our dancing skills. Every one tends to show his best and "
a little drop of water softly hits our face and pushes us to show our dancing skills...
all becomes or we all become
there are so many mistakes that need to be corrected
p.s. now i know why there are so many mistakes
"( I was second year secondary school st)"
this explains everything
the last piece is better (form and substance)
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Many Thx for dropping by my topic
'they're full of mistakes" yeah, i'dn't agree much more
banch of thx for ur efforts, It's really nice of you to correct my mistakes dear
Hvae happy day