well done girl 
that's pretty good I REALLY LIKE IT SOOO MUCH
especially this part
My life *was *bad ... Too sad
I never felt *Alive, I was always dead*
I got no home , not even a bed
But my dreams never got out of my head*
and this one too
You told me you're love maker !
No, you're a heart breaker
I'm your *heart taker*