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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : The best poem I wrote


Mohamed
07-08-2007, 05:54 PM
Like a butterfly you flew around
And I ran behind you like a child
But no matter how hard I tried
You faded away into my failure’s cloud

You let me fall only cause I drowned
When I though you’d lend me your hand
Oh my God! Was I stupid or blind
If I though you’d stay by my side

Sometimes, life drives me mad
With all this confusion in my mind
Should I be disappointed or ashamed
For all the good intentions I had !

I know may be I was undecided
Choked by the first story I lived
My heart and my soul were injured
And for that my felings were troubled

May be I was cruel and unkind
And you were the victim I found
But God knows what I felt inside
And what kind of relationships I searched

I wished you’d be my second world
My source of joy in my love’s land
I wished you’d be more than a friend
I hoped you’d finally understand

I really can’t see why you became hard
Why you knifed my heart with a sword
Why can’t you leave the past behind
Why don’t change all with a simple word

It seems you only care for your pride
But never if I will be glad or sad
So your rancors are not easy to hide
And for that you still can’t look ahead

I think love could never be so bad
‘Cause it’s not a simple thing you can pretend
So your feeling was just a masquerade
And my love to you died and crumbled in the end.

hadjer
08-08-2007, 10:23 PM
woow realy good
i liked this one

I wished you’d be my second world
My source of joy in my love’s land
I wished you’d be more than a friend
I hoped you’d finally understand

i realy liked it
keep going

ghanou
09-08-2007, 02:14 PM
that is great pleasure to read this poem, I would like to send you my best thanks, thank you very much for your particiaption

bchouli
09-08-2007, 03:01 PM
!!! What a genius you are
My compliments

Mohamed
09-08-2007, 03:45 PM
Thanks for you all dear friends

Mohamed
13-08-2007, 06:18 PM
Any comment?

mab
14-08-2007, 12:01 AM
Oh cool man .. thats nice ^^

Mohamed
02-09-2007, 04:40 PM
Thanks a lot dear friend

la*amina
02-09-2007, 06:47 PM
HI !! English ; here a personne who isn't your FRIEND
Hi !!! English ..here a personne who rode your poem
realy . .to be franch ! i 'll be in need to a dictionnary to understund your say
and because i am curious to know what you wrote i'll do it with real pleasure

just i want to ask you a question !!! if you permise me

when did you write it ?? answer me please

NOT A FRIEND

Mohamed
09-09-2007, 05:18 PM
Thanks Amina for the comment

hocine96
09-09-2007, 05:27 PM
merci c geniale

Mohamed
09-09-2007, 05:28 PM
Merci à toi aussi cher Hocine

أحلام
09-09-2007, 06:11 PM
c'est vraiment trop beau
j'ai pas oublier et je vais pas oublier le poéme k jté demandé lol

Mohamed
09-09-2007, 06:37 PM
Merci Ahlem! J'ai le poème mais je ne peux pas le publier ici!!! Tu sais bien pourquoi

la*amina
11-09-2007, 04:18 PM
please...when did you write it

Mohamed
12-09-2007, 06:01 PM
Le 20 Aout 2005

ASTUCIEUX
13-09-2007, 10:00 AM
peace be upon you

I have no words to add

because you had used all of them in your poem

it's too long and gorgeous

wonderful words

deep emotions

God bless you

waiting for more

Mohamed
13-09-2007, 03:18 PM
Thank you dear friend. You can find other poems of mine just by doing a simple research on this forum

ASTUCIEUX
15-09-2007, 10:09 AM
ok I'll see

Mohamed
15-09-2007, 03:15 PM
Thanks a lot dear friend